549374 - Software Update descriptions for Camino 1.6.11

Status: RESOLVED FIXED

(Camino Graveyard :: Product Site, defect)

Description

[Smokey Ardisson (offline for a while; not following bugs - do not email)]

Since we're EOLing 1.6.x with this release, I think that we should probably have some additional or different text for the update description, probably something like the intro paragraphs of the Release Notes.

As an example, this is the relnote text we used for 1.0.6 when we EOLed 10.2 support (note we've changed some of the general relnote language since then, so we may want to merge):

Camino 1.0.6 is a security and stability update for Camino 1.0.x users running Mac OS X 10.2.8. Camino 1.0.6 will be the last update in the 1.0.x series and is thus the last version of Camino to support Mac OS X 10.2.

All users on Mac OS X 10.2.8 are recommended to upgrade to this version; all users of Mac OS X 10.3 or higher should upgrade to Camino 1.5.x instead.

Comment 1

[Smokey Ardisson (offline for a while; not following bugs - do not email)]

So something like this, except perhaps with some <strong> sprinkled in somewhere?

<p>Camino 1.6.11 is a security and stability update for Camino 1.6.x users running Mac OS X 10.3.9. Camino 1.6.11 will be the last update in the 1.6.x series and is thus the last version of Camino to support Mac OS X 10.3.</p>

<p>All users on Mac OS X 10.3.9 are urged to upgrade to this version; all users on Mac OS X 10.4 or higher should upgrade to Camino 2.0.x instead.</p>

<p>For details, see the <a href="http://caminobrowser.org/releases/1.6.11/">release notes</a>.</p>

Comment 2

[Smokey Ardisson (offline for a while; not following bugs - do not email)]

Attachment: Draft 1.6.11-en

Sam suggested bolding the second paragraph, which is what I had been thinking about doing, too.

Comment 3

[Smokey Ardisson (offline for a while; not following bugs - do not email)]

Attachment: Screenshot on 10.3.9

Comment 4

[Smokey Ardisson (offline for a while; not following bugs - do not email)]

Attachment: Screenshot on 10.5.8

Comment 5

[Stuart Morgan]

Comment on attachment 429618 [details]
Draft 1.6.11-en

sr=smorgan.

Per irc it would be nice if the 10.4+ part were removed (since only 10.3.9 users will see this update notification) but if that makes the translations tricky I think we can spare a few extra electrons.

Comment 6

[Smokey Ardisson (offline for a while; not following bugs - do not email)]

Marcello, can you comment on Stuart's comment?  Should it be easy enough for everyone to delete the bits after the ; in the second paragraph, or would it be easier to have those first two paragraphs matching exactly the paragraphs in the Release Notes?

I'll mail the list about the Release Notes and this file once we have a decision here.

Comment 7

[Marcello Testi]

I think the 10.4 part should be easily deleted and that shouldn't be too much work for the l10n teams.

Comment 8

[Smokey Ardisson (offline for a while; not following bugs - do not email)]

Attachment: 1.6.11-en for translation

OK, here's the final version, ready for translation.

Comment 9

[Smokey Ardisson (offline for a while; not following bugs - do not email)]

Attachment: 1.6.11-ja

1.6.11-ja from waverider

Comment 10

[Igor Pryadkin]

Attachment: 1.6.11-ru

Comment 11

[Erik Sørngård]

Attachment: 1.6.11-no

Comment 12

[Ernesto]

Attachment: Spanish translation for Camino 1.6.11 update

Comment 13

[Sébastien Desvignes]

Attachment: 1.6.11-fr

French translation

Comment 14

[Smokey Ardisson (offline for a while; not following bugs - do not email)]

Attachment: 1.6.11-pl

1.6.11-pl from Piotr

Comment 15

[Markus Amalthea Magnuson]

Attachment: Swedish update description

Comment 16

[Smokey Ardisson (offline for a while; not following bugs - do not email)]

Attachment: 1.6.11-sl

1.6.11-sl from Jan

Comment 17

[Tobias Stohr]

Attachment: German Software Update Description

Comment 18

[Smokey Ardisson (offline for a while; not following bugs - do not email)]

Comment on attachment 430642 [details]
1.6.11-ja

Hrm, seems we've not been consistent with the naming; I think this should be 'ja' but we've mostly been using 'jp'.  I need to remember to run a test to see what works.

Comment 19

[Marcello Testi]

Attachment: Italian description

Comment 20

[Smokey Ardisson (offline for a while; not following bugs - do not email)]

(In reply to comment #18)
> (From update of attachment 430642 [details])
> Hrm, seems we've not been consistent with the naming; I think this should be
> 'ja' but we've mostly been using 'jp'.  I need to remember to run a test to see
> what works.

So, since time immemorial, we've been serving all of our Japanese users an English update description despite waverider having provided a Japanese one :p (except for Cm2.0, where we got it right).  Yay us!

Comment 21

[Marcello Testi]

Attachment: Chinese (simplified)

Comment 22

[Smokey Ardisson (offline for a while; not following bugs - do not email)]

These are now staged for release.  Thanks, everyone!

Comment 23

[stefan livens]

Attachment: dutch version

Comment 24

[Smokey Ardisson (offline for a while; not following bugs - do not email)]

(In reply to comment #23)
> Created an attachment (id=447596) [details]
> dutch version

Thanks, Stefan; I've pushed that live.