572910 - Awkward use of "eventually" on thanks-for-input page

Status: VERIFIED FIXED

(Input :: General, defect, P3)

Description

[Jesse Ruderman]

STR:
http://input.stage.mozilla.com/happy -->
http://input.stage.mozilla.com/thanks

"If you want to look at where your feedback was sent and eventually reported to, take a look at our  Firefox Input Dashboard."

This is really awkward.  I guess the "eventually" is there because we're worried that someone's feedback might have scrolled off before the page.  It would be better if we could make the link guarantee that the user's feedback shows up in the list -- show the user's feedback and the 9 previous entries, instead of the 10 latest.

The target URL could even be http://input.stage.mozilla.com/, and then the link could be AJAX ;)

Comment 1

[Aakash Desai [:aakashd]]

Yeah, let's make the text: "If you want to look at where your feedback was sent to, take a look at our  Firefox Input Dashboard."

Comment 2

[Fred Wenzel [:wenzel]]

two looks in one sentence? How about "If you want to see where...".

Comment 3

[Fred Wenzel [:wenzel]]

Committed the sentence as proposed in comment 2. If you disagree, reopen :)

http://github.com/fwenzel/reporter/commit/a153f8f

Comment 4

[Aakash Desai [:aakashd]]

Looks good!