Mainstream Newsletter - Version B copy request (beta)

RESOLVED FIXED

Status

www.mozilla.org
General
RESOLVED FIXED
8 years ago
6 years ago

People

(Reporter: Eve Murto, Unassigned)

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Description

8 years ago
This is a request for copy for our mainstream newsletter (Version B) which focused on Firefox beta. Thank you for your help. 

Same content as Version A newsletter,except for two stories which we will update: 

1) (Welcome Note from the Editor) 

Please help us out with copy for header and a welcome note from Jane, with the gist being "check out the Firefox 4" beta

Here is a humble suggestion:

HEADER:  Be a Part of Something Great  

Firefox users like you have a special opportunity to test drive the new browser during the beta process.  Please take a moment to download the Firefox 4 beta and check it out.  Its got some great, new features, and our developers around the world would like to hear your feedback.  Together we can make an incredible browser even better.  The Firefox Synch and Panorama features are truly special.  And with the new “Feedback” button your input is shared instantly with us.   Help us make Firefox the best in the world. 

Jane, Editor 
jane@mozilla.com 

2) LEAD STORY  - need copy   

We need copy for the main story (up to 100 words) . It currently says "Take Firefox with you" 

Here are some suggestions but we need your help with copy. 

HEADER:  Test Drive the New Firefox 4 Beta! 

Help make the next version of the world’s best browser. Download it today and click the Feedback button at any time to tell us what you think.  Check out all the new features in Firefox 4 that make your browsing more efficient, intuitive and fun! Don’t miss the new Panorama feature which organizes your tabs beautifully.  It allows you to clean up the clutter and organize your tabs into groups. Check out Firefox Synch which syncs your settings, passwords, history, open tabs and more, between your computer and cell phone.  And more… 
Get Firefox 4 Beta. [http://www.mozilla.com/firefox/beta/]


Deadline:  we'd love to have new copy by Friday Sept 3 

Thank you! 

Eve x288
Should I wait on final copy before setting this up?
OS: Mac OS X → All
Hardware: x86 → All
(In reply to comment #1)
> Should I wait on final copy before setting this up?

I would, given bug 591383 :-)
(Reporter)

Comment 3

8 years ago
Yes, please wait on it until we can send you some updated copy.

Comment 4

8 years ago
How does this new copy look?

Intro blurb:

HEADER:  Be a Part of Something Great 

Firefox users like you have a special opportunity to test-drive our new browser. Take a moment today to download the Firefox 4 beta and check out all the latest features. Our developers around the world would like to hear what you think, so be sure to use the Feedback button, which allows you to send us your comments and suggestions instantly. Thank you again for helping us make Firefox the best in the world!

And the other blurb:

HEADER:  Test-Drive the New Firefox 4 Beta

The world’s best browser is about to get even better--with your help! Download Firefox 4 beta today, and preview all the new features that will make your browsing quicker, easier and more intuitive. Check out the tab-organizer Panorama, which eliminates tab clutter. Try Firefox Sync, which synchronizes your settings, passwords, open tabs and more across all your devices. And don’t forget the new Feedback button, which sends us your comments instantly. Get Firefox 4 Beta. [http://www.mozilla.com/firefox/beta/]
(Assignee)

Updated

6 years ago
Component: www.mozilla.org/firefox → www.mozilla.org
Product: Websites → Websites

Comment 5

6 years ago
Closing old Mozilla.org website bugs due to them not being relevant to the new Python-based Bedrock system. Re-open if this is a critical bug and should be resolved on the new system too.
Status: NEW → RESOLVED
Last Resolved: 6 years ago
Resolution: --- → WONTFIX

Updated

6 years ago
Resolution: WONTFIX → FIXED
(Assignee)

Updated

6 years ago
Component: www.mozilla.org → General
Product: Websites → www.mozilla.org
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