597717 - Update Copy on Firefox/Sync page

Status: VERIFIED FIXED

(www.mozilla.org :: General, defect, P2)

Description

[Caitlin Looney]

We'll be consolidating the firefox/mobile/sync page with the firefox/sync page (keeping https://www.mozilla.com/en-US/firefox/sync/, but updating some of the copy)

Under the "Why Sync Up?" section, please replace the existing with the following:

Get Up and Go
Looking at driving directions or reservation times on your desktop but need to leave in a hurry? Just get up and go and have your history and open tabs waiting for you on your mobile phone. Or, stop your work and pick up where you left off on your home computer. 

Never Start From Scratch
Get a new computer or phone, but always have your Firefox. Don't worry about resetting passwords or retyping long and painful URLs that you've already visited. Firefox Sync saves your bookmarks, passwords and form data so you can hit the ground running at your desk or on the go. 

Security
Your information is encrypted so only you can access it when you enter your Secret Phrase. Firefox puts security as a top priority and syncing is no exception.

Delete: Learn about Firefox Sync on your phone (now available on the Firefox Home iPhone app).

Comment 1

[Craig Cook (:craigcook)]

Done in r74852.

Comment 2

[Stephen Donner [:stephend] Not actively reading bugmail]

Caitlin, please review:

http://www-trunk.stage.mozilla.com/en-US/firefox/sync/
http://www-trunk.stage.mozilla.com/en-US/mobile/platforms/

1) On http://www-trunk.stage.mozilla.com/en-US/firefox/sync/, "Secret Phrase" is capitalized in the main block, but is lower-cased on the right-hand side; can we please pick one and be consistent?

2) Why is "Add-on" capitalized everywhere?  It's not a proper noun, so in copy it should be lower-cased, and capitalized only in headings -- see https://addons.mozilla.org/en-US/firefox/ for the canonical/authoritative example.

Comment 3

[Caitlin Looney]

(In reply to comment #2)
> Caitlin, please review:
> 
> http://www-trunk.stage.mozilla.com/en-US/firefox/sync/
> http://www-trunk.stage.mozilla.com/en-US/mobile/platforms/
> 
> 1) On http://www-trunk.stage.mozilla.com/en-US/firefox/sync/, "Secret Phrase"
> is capitalized in the main block, but is lower-cased on the right-hand side;
> can we please pick one and be consistent?

Secret Phrase should change to "Sync Key" in both places.
> 
> 2) Why is "Add-on" capitalized everywhere?  It's not a proper noun, so in copy
> it should be lower-cased, and capitalized only in headings -- see
> https://addons.mozilla.org/en-US/firefox/ for the canonical/authoritative
> example.

Agreed. It's add-ons. The only time is should be uppercase if it's in a title of as a proper noun with Firefox Add-ons.

Comment 4

[Caitlin Looney]

These look good:
> http://www-trunk.stage.mozilla.com/en-US/firefox/sync/ (push live as soon as possible)
> http://www-trunk.stage.mozilla.com/en-US/mobile/platforms/ (push live with beta 1)

Comment 5

[Caitlin Looney]

Can we push these changes:  http://www-trunk.stage.mozilla.com/en-US/firefox/sync/ live to production?

Comment 6

[Stephen Donner [:stephend] Not actively reading bugmail]

(In reply to comment #5)
> Can we push these changes: 
> http://www-trunk.stage.mozilla.com/en-US/firefox/sync/ live to production?

Yep; looks good from my side, so adding push-needed keywords.

Comment 7

[Alex Buchanan [:abuchanan]]

r75796 on prod

Comment 8

[raymond [:retornam] (inactive)]

verified fixed on production http://www.mozilla.com/en-US/firefox/sync/