Update Copy on Firefox/Sync page

VERIFIED FIXED

Status

P2
major
VERIFIED FIXED
8 years ago
6 years ago

People

(Reporter: clooney, Assigned: craigcook)

Tracking

Firefox Tracking Flags

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Details

(Whiteboard: [sync], URL)

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Description

8 years ago
We'll be consolidating the firefox/mobile/sync page with the firefox/sync page (keeping https://www.mozilla.com/en-US/firefox/sync/, but updating some of the copy)

Under the "Why Sync Up?" section, please replace the existing with the following:

Get Up and Go
Looking at driving directions or reservation times on your desktop but need to leave in a hurry? Just get up and go and have your history and open tabs waiting for you on your mobile phone. Or, stop your work and pick up where you left off on your home computer. 

Never Start From Scratch
Get a new computer or phone, but always have your Firefox. Don't worry about resetting passwords or retyping long and painful URLs that you've already visited. Firefox Sync saves your bookmarks, passwords and form data so you can hit the ground running at your desk or on the go. 

Security
Your information is encrypted so only you can access it when you enter your Secret Phrase. Firefox puts security as a top priority and syncing is no exception.

Delete: Learn about Firefox Sync on your phone (now available on the Firefox Home iPhone app).
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Updated

8 years ago
Priority: -- → P2
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Updated

8 years ago
Assignee: nobody → craigcook.bugz
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Comment 1

8 years ago
Done in r74852.
Caitlin, please review:

http://www-trunk.stage.mozilla.com/en-US/firefox/sync/
http://www-trunk.stage.mozilla.com/en-US/mobile/platforms/

1) On http://www-trunk.stage.mozilla.com/en-US/firefox/sync/, "Secret Phrase" is capitalized in the main block, but is lower-cased on the right-hand side; can we please pick one and be consistent?

2) Why is "Add-on" capitalized everywhere?  It's not a proper noun, so in copy it should be lower-cased, and capitalized only in headings -- see https://addons.mozilla.org/en-US/firefox/ for the canonical/authoritative example.
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Comment 3

8 years ago
(In reply to comment #2)
> Caitlin, please review:
> 
> http://www-trunk.stage.mozilla.com/en-US/firefox/sync/
> http://www-trunk.stage.mozilla.com/en-US/mobile/platforms/
> 
> 1) On http://www-trunk.stage.mozilla.com/en-US/firefox/sync/, "Secret Phrase"
> is capitalized in the main block, but is lower-cased on the right-hand side;
> can we please pick one and be consistent?

Secret Phrase should change to "Sync Key" in both places.
> 
> 2) Why is "Add-on" capitalized everywhere?  It's not a proper noun, so in copy
> it should be lower-cased, and capitalized only in headings -- see
> https://addons.mozilla.org/en-US/firefox/ for the canonical/authoritative
> example.

Agreed. It's add-ons. The only time is should be uppercase if it's in a title of as a proper noun with Firefox Add-ons.
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Comment 4

8 years ago
These look good:
> http://www-trunk.stage.mozilla.com/en-US/firefox/sync/ (push live as soon as possible)
> http://www-trunk.stage.mozilla.com/en-US/mobile/platforms/ (push live with beta 1)
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Comment 5

8 years ago
Can we push these changes:  http://www-trunk.stage.mozilla.com/en-US/firefox/sync/ live to production?
(In reply to comment #5)
> Can we push these changes: 
> http://www-trunk.stage.mozilla.com/en-US/firefox/sync/ live to production?

Yep; looks good from my side, so adding push-needed keywords.
Whiteboard: [sync]
r75796 on prod
Status: NEW → RESOLVED
Last Resolved: 8 years ago
Keywords: push-needed
Resolution: --- → FIXED
verified fixed on production http://www.mozilla.com/en-US/firefox/sync/
Status: RESOLVED → VERIFIED
Component: www.mozilla.org/firefox → www.mozilla.org
Product: Websites → Websites
Component: www.mozilla.org → General
Product: Websites → www.mozilla.org
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