Update copy on existing: https://www.mozilla.com/en-US/mobile/

VERIFIED FIXED

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VERIFIED FIXED
8 years ago
6 years ago

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(Reporter: clooney, Assigned: craigcook)

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Description

8 years ago
Please update the mobile home page as we get ready for Firefox beta for Android and Nokia N900:

1) Please change header to:

"Take Your Firefox Anywhere"

2) Change subhead to:

"Get Firefox 4 beta on your Android phone"

3) Under Our Mobile Story, change copy to:

"Take Firefox with you anywhere. Built on the same engine as Firefox 4 for the desktop, Firefox 4 beta for Android and Nokia N900 is packed full of your favorite features like Sync, Add-ons and the Awesome Bar. Enjoy a personalized  and seamless browsing experience across multiple devices. Watch the video to see how you’ve helped us get here and where we’re going next."

4) Change "Take Your Firefox Anywhere" to "Get Up and Go"

5) Change the copy under Get Up and Go to:

"Enjoy the Awesome Bar, add-ons, one-touch sharing and more. Plus, with Firefox Sync, get up and go and have exactly what you're looking for waiting on your phone."

6) Redirect "Learn more about Firefox Sync" to: https://www.mozilla.com/en-US/firefox/sync/

7) Change "Developers: Get in Early" to "Developers: Extend Your Reach"

8) Under Extend Your Reach section change copy to:
"Build rich mobile apps using open technologies like HTML5, CSS and JavaScript, or create mobile add-ons and showcase your innovations on millions of devices. 

9) Redirect "Develop for mobile" link to: https://developer.mozilla.org/en-US/mobile

10) Under the Get Firefox section change copy to:
"Download the latest release of Firefox for Android and Nokia N900."
<"Download" should be hyperlinked and direct to: https://www.mozilla.com/mobile/download>

11) Under Join the Movement section add:
"Try the beta and Go Mobile" and link it to: https://www.mozilla.com/mobile/beta

Thanks.
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Comment 1

8 years ago
This is linked to mobile/download.
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Updated

8 years ago
Summary: https://www.mozilla.com/en-US/mobile/ → Update copy on existing: https://www.mozilla.com/en-US/mobile/
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Updated

8 years ago
Assignee: nobody → craigcook.bugz
What's the status on this?
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Comment 3

8 years ago
(In reply to comment #2)
> What's the status on this?

Done and needs review. 

The updated "Developers: Extend your Reach" box runs a bit longer now thanks to the longer wrapping title, so the text bumps against the bottom edge of the box (which is a background image and can't be easily adjusted). Not a huge problem but it does look off. We could edit the copy down a bit to take up less space, just need to lose a word or two. I could make the background a bit taller but I'll have to recreate it (I don't have the originals).
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Comment 4

8 years ago
Only two edits:

1)Under Out mobile Story, change "the Nokia N900" to "Maemo"
2) Download the Emulator should link to http://www.mozilla.com/en-US/mobile/download/

Then it's ready to be pushed.
(In reply to comment #4)
> Only two edits:
> 
> 1)Under Out mobile Story, change "the Nokia N900" to "Maemo"
> 2) Download the Emulator should link to
> http://www.mozilla.com/en-US/mobile/download/

done
Status: NEW → RESOLVED
Last Resolved: 8 years ago
Resolution: --- → FIXED
Component: www.mozilla.org/firefox → www.mozilla.org
Product: Websites → Websites
Component: www.mozilla.org → General
Product: Websites → www.mozilla.org
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