Please implement the following Rel Notes at this location: http://www.mozilla.com/en-US/mobile/4.0b1/releasenotes/index.html Alex, the copy changes can be found on this gdoc: https://docs.google.com/document/edit?id=1RnN5NoSu6Q6YyJhw3takO1I6WEJsx-0WO-hSjDvuwzM&hl=en# (It's a private document, so let me know if I need to add anyone) These changes take from 2.0a1 rel notes. (Red/bold is new copy, strikethrough is what we'd like removed). This page is targeted to go live on Tuesday, October 5.
Can I have access to the Google doc ? (email@example.com please)
The document contains the following : "See a list of untested devices that meet our System Requirements." But there is no such list in the document.
The FAQ for "What are Firefox Add-ons and how can I get them on my mobile device?" is not clear.
That was strange -- they paragraph got totally jumbled. Revised version: "Add-ons let you customize your Firefox by adding are small pieces of software that let you add or change the look or functionality of Firefox. Install add-ons directly to your Firefox by swiping to the left and tapping on the browser tools "gear" button on the bottom right-hand side of your screen, then choosing the add-ons “puzzle piece” button to discover and install the add-ons that are most useful to you."
(In reply to comment #2) Sorry, we added that recently and I have add this link to the gdoc: https://wiki.mozilla.org/Mobile/Platforms/Android#System_Requirements
(In reply to comment #4) For the first sentence, I've removed "are", so it's : "Add-ons let you customize your Firefox by adding small pieces of software that let you add or change the look or functionality of Firefox."
Thanks...oops, I see the strike through didn't come over.
(In reply to comment #7) Oh ok, I've taken the good version from the gdoc.
FAQ "What browser engine does Firefox use?" "The mobile version of Firefox uses Gecko version 1.9.3" Isn't it 2.0 ?
Hey - Sorry about that. The latest version states: "2.0b7pre"
Created attachment 481319 [details] [diff] [review] Release notes The only thing left (if I haven't made mistakes) is to change the links to download.
Android: http://download.mozilla.org/?product=Firefox-Mobile-4.0b1&os=android&lang=en-US Maemo: http://download.mozilla.org/?product=firefox-mobile-4.0b1&os=maemo&lang=en-US Desktop Linux: http://ftp.mozilla.org/pub/mozilla.org/mobile/releases/4.0b1/linux-i686/fennec-4.0b1.en-US.linux-i686.tar.bz2 Mac: http://ftp.mozilla.org/pub/mozilla.org/mobile/releases/4.0b1/macosx-i686/fennec-4.0b1.en-US.mac.dmg Windows: http://ftp.mozilla.org/pub/mozilla.org/mobile/releases/4.0b1/win32-i686/fennec-4.0b1.en-US.win32.zip
Make header: Firefox 4 Beta 1 for Android and Maemo Release Notes Subhead: Change first sentence from "Get up and go and take your Firefox anywhere. Firefox beta for Android and Nokia N900 is built on the same technology platform as Firefox 4 for desktop computers, but optimized for browsing on a mobile device." TO "Take your Firefox anywhere. Firefox 4 Beta 1 for Android and Maemo is built on the same technology platform as Firefox 4 for desktop computers, just optimized for browsing on a mobile device."
Can we please get this staged? When are we shipping?
(In reply to comment #14) > Can we please get this staged? When are we shipping? http://www-trunk.stage.mozilla.com/en-US/mobile/4.0b1/releasenotes/
-Change first expandable header from "What's News in Firefox 4 beta 1 for Android and Nokia N900" to "What's new if Firefox 4 Beta 1 for Android and Maemo" Under the same section: -Change the first disclaimer paragraph to: "Fennec is the codename of Mozilla’s mobile project, however, the official product name is Firefox. For pre-beta releases of Firefox, we refer to it by the project's name, Fennec." (deleted last sentence). -Change alpah to "beta" in the second paragraph: "Shipping with many of your favorite Firefox desktop features like Firefox Sync, Add-ons and the Awesome Bar, this beta release brings Firefox to the Android platform, the fastest growing smartphone platform in the world." -Remove "extremely" in third paragraph in this section. Change "an" to "a" right in front of it.
Under the Get Up and Go Section: - Change "Fennec" to "Firefox" Under Responsiveness section: -Remove "greatly" -Delete "Save to PDF in the Site Menu lets you capture important content, like driving directions or a boarding pass, to view offline" under bulletted list of features
Under Known issues: -do not bullet "User Interface" as it's calling out a new section of bullets. -see above. same with "Keyboard"and "Known Bugs"
Under System Requirements: -Delete "and N810 mobile devices." in the first sentence
Under FAQ, only one question have Firefox 4 beta 1 "Do I need to setup Firefox Sync to use Firefox 4 beta 1 on my phone?" Remove "1" so they all just refer to the beta builds.
Also, in the top subhead, there is a link missing for "provide suggestions" which should point people to: http://firefoxformobile.uservoice.com/forums/70211-firefox-for-mobile-ideas
(In reply to comment #16) > -Change first expandable header from "What's News in Firefox 4 beta 1 for > Android and Nokia N900" to "What's new if Firefox 4 Beta 1 for Android and > Maemo" > > Under the same section: > > -Change the first disclaimer paragraph to: "Fennec is the codename of Mozilla’s > mobile project, however, the official product name is Firefox. For pre-beta > releases of Firefox, we refer to it by the project's name, Fennec." (deleted > last sentence). > > -Change alpah to "beta" in the second paragraph: "Shipping with many of your > favorite Firefox desktop features like Firefox Sync, Add-ons and the Awesome > Bar, this beta release brings Firefox to the Android platform, the fastest > growing smartphone platform in the world." This still needs a comma, it currently shows ". Beta" as a new sentence. > > -Remove "extremely" in third paragraph in this section. Change "an" to "a" > right in front of it.
Under Downloading section: "Firefox.com/m/beta" is not linked (http://www.mozilla.com/en-US/m/beta)
Looks great. JaegerMonkey link needs to point here (http://hacks.mozilla.org/category/jagermonkey/) Under Developer Questions, but that's all.
Just a couple of nits: 1) Please delete: "For pre-beta releases of Firefox, we refer to it by the project's name, Fennec" (the 2nd sentence of the first paragraph under What's New section) 2)Add a 1 in the following sentence under What's New section "More personalized than ever before, Firefox 4 beta 1 is packed with your favorite features and great improvements. Other highlights include:" After those, looks great.
Verified FIXED on prod: http://www.mozilla.com/en-US/mobile/4.0b1/releasenotes/ (note that I didn't test content).