Closed Bug 627423 Opened 9 years ago Closed 9 years ago

Update Firefox 4 Beta First Run page for RC

Categories

(www.mozilla.org :: General, defect, P1, critical)

defect

Tracking

(Not tracked)

VERIFIED FIXED

People

(Reporter: lmesa, Assigned: jlong)

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Details

Attachments

(1 file, 1 obsolete file)

This page needs
-updated logo 
-updated copy
-updated screenshot
-updated feedback policy. 

All coming soon.
Attached file RC Logo
PLease update this page with attached logo.
Depends on: 625165
(In reply to comment #0)
> This page needs
> -updated logo 
> -updated copy
> -updated screenshot
> -updated feedback policy. 
> 
> All coming soon.

We also need to update URL to: http://www.mozilla.com/firefox/RC/firstrun/
Comment on attachment 506438 [details]
The updated Submit Feedback Screenshot should look like this

please ignore this attachment. need to upload the proper version of this screenshot.
Attachment #506438 - Attachment is obsolete: true
Depends on: 628416
Illustration can be found here: http://intothefuzz.com/beta/

Please use the PSD.
Copy for this page is very easy--

Top section:

Thanks for downloading Firefox 4 RC. We’re building something awesome together, so please let us know what you like and don’t like about your browsing experience.

We’ll be waiting for your feedback!
 
•	Features » (link to rc features page)
•	Share Feedback » (link to rc feedback page)
•	Release Notes » (link to rc rel notes)

[Please remove beta feedback video]

Bottom section

Tell Us What You Think
As a RC tester, you’re part of the team making Firefox 4. Tell us when you like or dislike something in Firefox by going to the “Help” menu and selecting the “Submit Feedback” option. You can even submit product suggestions!   

[Screenshot of submitting feedback from help menu]

[Because there is soo much less copy, the box for the bottom section will have to be made smaller. Not too sure how this is going to look]
screenshot needs to stay the same for beta. screenshot is only updated for RC. we still have beta 12 before rc and need to keep the older screenshot.
Assignee: nobody → jlong
Priority: -- → P1
Assignee: jlong → steven
Severity: normal → major
Target Milestone: --- → 1.4
(In reply to comment #5)
> Illustration can be found here: http://intothefuzz.com/beta/
> 
> Please use the PSD.

Please implement the new background--this is still missing.
Assignee: steven → anthony
hi anthony. any updates on this one? can you please send us a link to review when ready? thanks!
Committed r83854 and r83855.

http://www-trunk.stage.mozilla.com/en-US/firefox/4.0/firstrun/
Laura, yep, it's not good looking :) I'll try to put everything in the top box in two columns.
What if we make the image a bit smaller and took the top box and put it where we normally have the bottom box?

So basically, we condense the content of the two boxes into one below the illustration. Tara, John--any ideas?
(In reply to comment #12)
> So basically, we condense the content of the two boxes into one below the
> illustration. Tara, John--any ideas?
That seems like a good place to start.
(In reply to comment #12)
> What if we make the image a bit smaller and took the top box and put it where
> we normally have the bottom box?
> 
> So basically, we condense the content of the two boxes into one below the
> illustration. Tara, John--any ideas?

do we need to tweak the copy a little bit if we combine them? The content on top and bottom box are both currently about seeking for feedback. Maybe we can make the content on the first box, thank you and welcome message and less asking for feedback as we address that in the content in the 2nd box.

but i agree about just having one box as the content is pretty short.
Tell Us What You Think
Thanks for downloading Firefox 4 RC. As a RC tester, you’re part of the team making Firefox 4. Tell us when you like or dislike something in Firefox by going to the “Help” menu and selecting the “Submit Feedback” option. You can even submit product suggestions!

[Screenshot]

Thanks' for your help--we’ll be waiting for your feedback.
	•	New Features »
	•	Share Feedback »
	•	Release Notes »
Assignee: anthony → jlong
Severity: major → critical
Committed changes in r84307

I wasn't sure how you want it to look; to combine those boxes we have to bring it up much higher. Here's a prototype design, let me know where it should go from here:

http://www-trunk.stage.mozilla.com/en-US/firefox/4.0/firstrun/
I talked with Laura and I understand this better. just committed a new design. the logo is a bit hard to read I think.

committed in r84310 on trunk
Thanks James--this is looking better!

So, I think the illustration might be cropped too low--the image should look almost identical to WN page for RC.
Also, can we move the content of the first paragraph so it spans horizontally across the white box? The links can be aligned to the left underneath.
ok, sounds good.

committed updates in r84354 on trunk
Looks awesome. I'm sold.
Keywords: qawanted
Status: NEW → RESOLVED
Closed: 9 years ago
Resolution: --- → FIXED
committed to staging r84446
old bug closing http://www.mozilla.com/en-US/firefox/4.0/firstrun/
Status: RESOLVED → VERIFIED
Component: www.mozilla.org/firefox → www.mozilla.org
Component: www.mozilla.org → General
Product: Websites → www.mozilla.org
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