627937 - design Fx4 version of mobile features page

Status: RESOLVED FIXED

(Marketing :: Design, task)

Description

[John Slater]

Placeholder bug for now...content coming soon.

Comment 1

[John Slater]

Attachment: mobile features copy - v1

Caitlin and I worked on this copy together, so it should be pretty close to final. Might need a few tweaks once it gets to layout, but not too many.

About design, this page should follow whatever tweaks you end up making to the layout & style of the desktop features page.

Thanks!

Comment 2

[Lee Tom]

Mockup for Mobile Features here:
http://intothefuzz.com/leetom/Mozilla.com/JPG/mobile_features_02.jpg

I'm not sure how many screenshots/visuals we'd like to use, so there are many blank boxes FPO, and some images that are currently live on the page. This will at least get new copy in front of you to look through.

Thanks!

Comment 3

[John Slater]

Cool, thanks Lee. Caitlin, Mayumi...what do you think?

Comment 4

[Caitlin Looney]

Thanks Lee and Slater. A few comments:

1. The bottom right section of the Easy Personalization section looks unusually empty. Perhaps we can remove the N900 image above and add one Add-ons Manager screenshot in portrait display? (We need to update the screenshot in the N900 anyway.)

2. In the Productivity Section, we should call out Site Menu instead of or in addition to "Stay in Control." Consider: "Stay in Control: Site Menu" or ditch "Stay in Control" and just use Site Menu, similar to how we jut used "Content Menu" Also, you won't need a separate image for each Site Menu option because it will be just one more title added or removed from the list, so you'll have a bunch of very similar images. 

Those were the main areas for me.

Comment 5

[John Slater]

Thanks Caitlin. Re: your second comment above, let's change that to Site Menu.

Also, in addition to the lower right of the Personalization section looking empty, that entire area looks a little cluttered to me. Maybe we can use the empty part as an overflow area to make the entire section feel more orderly?

Comment 6

[Caitlin Looney]

Site Menu it is.

I agree and am for the more orderly look, but I would like to swap out the N900 image. I can also get new professional images of Firefox 4 on an Android. I should do that anyway.

Comment 7

[Lee Tom]

Thanks for the feedback, y'all. Here's another mockup:
http://www.intothefuzz.com/leetom/Mozilla.com/JPG/mobile_features_02.jpg

- Site Menu header 
- evened the blank spaces out (deleted unneeded image boxes)
- Caitlin, if you want to send me the new Android phone image, I'll replace the N900

Comment 8

[John Slater]

This looks much better, thanks Lee. PMMs...what do you think?

Comment 9

[My]

+1 no further comments

Comment 10

[Lee Tom]

If there are no further comments, I can post the PSD today. Caitlin, are there any other graphic/layout concerns you want me to tweak? If updating the N900 image will take some time to produce, we can always drop that into the page after it's been built.

Comment 11

[Caitlin Looney]

Yes. I will have some graphical tweaks, but like you said, it will take a bit of time. I'll try and get you new images in the next 2-3 weeks.

Comment 12

[Lee Tom]

Sounds good, Caitlin. 

Here's the PSD:
http://www.intothefuzz.com/leetom/Mozilla.com/PSD/mobile_features_02.psd

Comment 13

[John Slater]

thanks!