Closed Bug 640698 Opened 13 years ago Closed 13 years ago

[Fx4MobileLaunch] Copy Updates to Firefox 4 for mobile Features page

Categories

(www.mozilla.org :: General, defect, P1)

x86
macOS

Tracking

(Not tracked)

VERIFIED FIXED

People

(Reporter: clooney, Assigned: jlong)

Details

(Whiteboard: [pushed])

Due to some last minute changes to the product, the Features page (http://www-fx4.stage.mozilla.com/en-US/mobile/features/) needs to be edited slightly: 

1.Under Cutting Edge section:
* Video has been pulled out of Firefox 4. Can we pull the Video & Audio section.
If you need another section to fill the space, you can add: 

Multi-Process
Firefox takes advantage of new multi-core CPUs by running the browser in multiple processes. This provides a more responsive browsing experience and better battery life.

2. Under Friendly to the Touch
* Can we change "Browsing:Yes, Clutter:No" to "Full Screen View" so it's consistent with the other headers? Seems more clear.

Thanks!
Hey Caitlin. Is it ok if this goes into the mobile release instead of the desktop one?
Yes, that's fine. AS long as the page is live when we go live. Thanks!
Sounds like a deal. Laura, here's another one for 1.5.
Priority: -- → P1
Target Milestone: --- → 1.5
Thanks!
So we're all set with this?
(In reply to comment #5)
> So we're all set with this?

Yes - James, assigning this to you. All the details should be good to go. Mostly small copy changes on this one.
Assignee: nobody → jlong
Summary: Copy Updates to Firefox 4 for mobile Features page → [Fx4MobileLaunch] Copy Updates to Firefox 4 for mobile Features page
done in trunk r86396
Status: NEW → RESOLVED
Closed: 13 years ago
Keywords: qawanted
Resolution: --- → FIXED
One more thing: Personas is not a feature of Mobile Firefox but an add-on. Not to confuse Desktop Firefox users, please state it requires an add-on.
Status: RESOLVED → REOPENED
Resolution: FIXED → ---
It is a feature and something we wanted to call out separately, but I see your point sense "add-on" isn't mentioned.

James/Laura/Slater - is it too late to add a few words to the second sentence?: "Just install the Personas for mobile add-on and choose anything from simple designs to colorful patterns to content from partners like Harry Potter and Bob Marley."

Personas for mobile add-on should be linked to: https://addons.mozilla.org/en-US/mobile/addon/personas/

Please let me know.
(In reply to comment #9)
> "Just install the Personas for mobile add-on and choose anything from simple
> designs to colorful patterns to content from partners like Harry Potter and Bob
> Marley."

:)
Re: comment #9, I'm not exactly sure where we are in the process, but do know that we generally want the site code frozen at this point. Probably best to look to James for an up-to-the-minute report.

From what I do know, it'd be my recommendation to hold off on this copy update for the good of the overall release stability. We can always make the addition in 2.0 (April 12) or perhaps even as one-off after the launch if it's important enough.
I am ok with this. Should I file a separate bug?
Yes please!
Status: REOPENED → RESOLVED
Closed: 13 years ago13 years ago
Resolution: --- → FIXED
Sorry, I wasn't checking bugzilla over the weekend. John summed it up nicely though. We should err on the side of postponing changes unless absolutely necessary. Even if it's just a couple works, it's another revision to keep track of and possibly introduce bugs (i.e. crap, I didn't mean to push that out with that other change).

So yes, glad we can wait. :)
r86664 on stage
Whiteboard: [pushed]
Component: www.mozilla.org/firefox → www.mozilla.org
Component: www.mozilla.org → General
Product: Websites → www.mozilla.org
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