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Created attachment 523707 [details] Copy to review More details on this project are located in https://bugzilla.mozilla.org/show_bug.cgi?id=645192 We're planning on launching an email preference center in Q2. We don't need to spend a lot of time on copy - pretty basic - but would love another set of eyes. Page 1 - New email subscribers view of the preference center - page will only be visible immediately after the subscriber joins the main newsletter list. It will market other newsletters. Page 2 - New Email Unsubscribe Confirmation Screen - if a user chooses to unsubscribe from an email (or all emails) - they will receive this message.
Summary: Email preference center → Email preference center copy request
Created attachment 524519 [details] Revised preference center copy Just some small tweaks. Let me know if you have any questions.
Hey - looks good. We worked with the header a bit. Could you take a look at these sentences and see if this works? Feel free to spruce it up. "Thanks! You’ve successfully subscribed to Mozilla & You – our monthly newsletter with updates about Firefox. Now tell us more about yourself and sign up for more email news from Mozilla. "
Hey, here are a couple of alt versions of the copy in comment 2. In particular, I find "now tell us" a little aggressive. Sounds like there isn't a choice. Or is there a reason you guys worded it that way? Thanks! You’ve successfully subscribed to Mozilla & You, our monthly newsletter featuring updates about Firefox. You can also tell us more about yourself and sign up for more email news from Mozilla. Thanks! You're all signed up for Mozilla & You. Every month, you'll receive the latest updates about Firefox. If you like, tell us a little more about yourself and sign up for more email news from Mozilla.
I like version 1 best. I don't want to sound pushy... but I want to be firm in pushing them into the preference center process. (Also - very open to testing different treatments). Also - I got a peek at the first draft of the page design. The layout will be tweaked a lot - but what isn't changing is the treatment of the page title. Based on the design, the copy may need to be tweaked a bit. Matej - can you take a look at the current layout? I think we'll need to trim down the above. The headline space is somewhat of a challenge... I want to says thanks so they realize they've reached a success page, but I also want to drive them into the preference page. See attached. Maybe we can chat tomorrow when you get back on the phone?
Thanks Winston. Matej, please follow up with Winston when you're back.
Here are some options for the headline (that communicate both that you've signed up and that there are more options below) and some ways at the copy. Let me know if any of these satisfy what you were looking for. [HEADLINE] You’re All Set! Now Get More. You’re All Set! But Wait, There’s More. Thanks! Want More? Success! Want More? Thanks for Signing Up! Keep Reading for More. [COPY] Now that you’ve subscribed to Mozilla & You, tell us more about yourself and sign up for other news from Mozilla. Tell us a little more about yourself, so we can send you more relevant information, and sign up for other Mozilla news. Want to get the most relevant info? Tell us a little more about yourself. And while you’re here, sign up for other Mozilla news.
Nice. I just placed the following into the design bug: You’re All Set! But Wait, There’s More. Want to get the most relevant info? Tell us a little more about yourself. And while you’re here, sign up for other Mozilla news.
Hi Matej - I was looking at one of our success pages and I think there is an opportunity to promote some other mozilla/firefox related ctas. The user will land on this page after they've updated their email preferences. We'll display a message thanking them for the update. Below that, we can highlight other actionable items. I've attached a similar page so you can get an idea of word count. We'd do a similar horizontal treatment with three boxes. Here's rough copy directions: ----- Thanks for updating your email preferences. While you’re here, check out other Firefox awesomeness. CTA 1 Get Up and Go It’s your Web anywhere you go. GET FIREFOX FOR MOBILE >> CTA 2 Add-ons - (Line about installing / using add-ons) CTA 3 Learn about Mozilla About Mozilla (link to info about Mozilla) --------------
let me know if you have any questions. Would it be possible to get copy by Wednesday?
Here you go: Thanks for updating your email preferences. While here, why not check out some more Firefox awesomeness. CTA 1 Get Up and Go It’s your Web anywhere you go. Get Firefox for mobile >> CTA 2 Added Extras Make Firefox do more with add-ons. Find out how >> CTA 3 About Us What's Mozilla all about? We're glad you asked >>
Ping. are we good to close this? I believe design wrapped up some time ago...
Good to close out. Thanks!
Status: NEW → RESOLVED
Last Resolved: 7 years ago
Resolution: --- → FIXED
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