Closed Bug 648569 Opened 13 years ago Closed 13 years ago

Fx4 upgrade INFLUENCER campaign - add videos to Mozilla Firefox videos page

Categories

(www.mozilla.org :: General, defect)

Product:
www.mozilla.org
Component:
General
Type:
defect
Priority:
Not set
Severity:
normal

Tracking

(Not tracked)

Status:
VERIFIED FIXED

People

(Reporter: jane, Assigned: sgarrity)

References

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URL
)

Details

Assignee: nobody → lforrest
URL: http://www.mozilla.com/en-US/firefox/...
Copy for each video. 

Title: Installing Firefox on MAC
Description: Learn how to install Firefox on your MAC.


Title:Installing Firefox on Windows
Description: Learn how to install Firefox on your Windows machine.
Please add these videos under the Video Gallery ->Firefox Desktop
Blocks: 648572
No longer blocks: 648572
Depends on: 648572
Blocks: 648575
Target Milestone: --- → 2.1
Assignee: lforrest → steven
Note: we are looking for a unique url for each of these videos - we are hoping this page supports that function. Happy for the videos to be on the 2nd page as someone scrolls to see more desktop videos.
Hey Steven - it would be great to have this (and it's connected bugs) done within the immediate 2.1 release if possible.
Added in trunk in r87404. A couple of minor notes:

 - The capitalization of "MAC" seems a bit odd in the title/desc. This seems to be written as "Mac" in most places.
 - The term "machine" in "...on your Windows machine." also seemed a bit odd. "Windows computer" seems like it might be a more common term.

(In reply to comment #3)
> Note: we are looking for a unique url for each of these videos - we are hoping
> this page supports that function.

Indeed it does. When pushed to production, the video pages will be:

http://www.mozilla.com/en-US/firefox/video/?video=upgrade-win
and 
http://www.mozilla.com/en-US/firefox/video/?video=upgrade-win


Please proof in trunk (http://www-trunk.stage.mozilla.com/en-US/firefox/video/) and if everything is in order, I'll push to Stage.
OS: Mac OS X → All
Hardware: x86 → All
Blocks: 648572
No longer depends on: 648572
(In reply to comment #5)
> Added in trunk in r87404. A couple of minor notes:
> 
>  - The capitalization of "MAC" seems a bit odd in the title/desc. This seems to
> be written as "Mac" in most places.

Agree - let's use the standards we have in place and looking at my Mac computer that seems to be the Apple standard. 

>  - The term "machine" in "...on your Windows machine." also seemed a bit odd.
> "Windows computer" seems like it might be a more common term.

Yes - agree again. Nix the valley speak and use computer. 
 
> (In reply to comment #3)
> > Note: we are looking for a unique url for each of these videos - we are hoping
> > this page supports that function.
> 
> Indeed it does. When pushed to production, the video pages will be:
> 
> http://www.mozilla.com/en-US/firefox/video/?video=upgrade-win
> and 
> http://www.mozilla.com/en-US/firefox/video/?video=upgrade-win
> 
> 
> Please proof in trunk (http://www-trunk.stage.mozilla.com/en-US/firefox/video/)
> and if everything is in order, I'll push to Stage.
(In reply to comment #6)
> (In reply to comment #5)
> > Added in trunk in r87404. A couple of minor notes:
> > 
> >  - The capitalization of "MAC" seems a bit odd in the title/desc. This seems to
> > be written as "Mac" in most places.
> 
> Agree - let's use the standards we have in place and looking at my Mac computer
> that seems to be the Apple standard. 

+1 (hope that wasn't something I missed earlier)


> >  - The term "machine" in "...on your Windows machine." also seemed a bit odd.
> > "Windows computer" seems like it might be a more common term.
> 
> Yes - agree again. Nix the valley speak and use computer. 

I find the phrase "Windows computer" oddly clinical. "Windows machine" feels
more conversational, but if you think it's not common enough, I'm fine losing
it.

My ideal scenario would be to say "...on your PC," but if it would be a problem
to change at this point, don't worry about it.
Updated the MAC/Mac and went with Matej's "... on your PC" - let me know if that should change.

Committed to trunk in r87493. Merged all updates to stage in r87494.
Status: NEW → RESOLVED
Closed: 13 years ago
Keywords: qawanted
Resolution: --- → FIXED
pushed to production r87525
Component: www.mozilla.org/firefox → www.mozilla.org
Component: www.mozilla.org → General
Product: Websites → www.mozilla.org
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