650946 - Copy Changes in the Object Description

Status: RESOLVED FIXED

(Websites :: webifyme.org, defect)

Description

[Grace Jimenez :grace]

Hi John, 

very minor changes in the object copy description. most of them just words and punctuation. since we will be sending this to our team to localize, can you please make the changes in the code by tomorrow end of day (4/19)?

You can find copy edits here: 
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1W8TtOcX-D8QqehqUuAKOOj54AJe5ItyMJaL6HaiIF8Y/edit?hl=en&authkey=CLP-6VY

thanks!

Comment 1

[Erica Kelly]

Grace - Just to clarify, you want all the words highlighted in red replaced, and the yellow highlighted area reworked (at least the first sentence), is that correct?

Comment 2

[Grace Jimenez :grace]

hi erica, 

i've already made the changes in the doc. I highlighted in red where I made the changes. 

The only thing that needs to be reworked is Line 945. 

Thanks!

Grace

Comment 3

[[:brez]]

All set..

[master bcd89e4] copy changes for bug 650946
 1 files changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)