New copy for 3.6 upgrade snippets

RESOLVED FIXED

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RESOLVED FIXED
7 years ago
7 years ago

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(Reporter: lforrest, Assigned: matej)

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Description

7 years ago
Let's remove all mentions of version numbers from the 3.6 snippets. To do that, a more generic yet enticing line of copy is needed. 

Objective: Inform these 3.6 laggards that a new version of Firefox is out, and that they should upgrade in order to gain the benefits of a better browser.  

We're currently using this: "Firefox 5 is here. Download today and put the web on fast forward."

I think that's fine, but would like to not mention a version number, add some urgency, and refresh this a bit. This new copy should be easy to l10n.
(Reporter)

Comment 1

7 years ago
Would be great to have this by end of week.
(Assignee)

Comment 2

7 years ago
Any of these work?

Get the latest version of Firefox for the latest technology, security and speed.

Download the latest in browsing. Download the new Firefox today!

Get the best of the Web with the latest version of Firefox. Download today!

The Web moves fast. So does Firefox. Download the latest version now!

Keep up with the speed of the Web. Download the new Firefox today!
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Comment 3

7 years ago
(In reply to comment #2)
> Any of these work?
> 
> Get the latest version of Firefox for the latest technology, security and
> speed.
> 
> Download the latest in browsing. Download the new Firefox today!
> 
> Get the best of the Web with the latest version of Firefox. Download today!
> 
> The Web moves fast. So does Firefox. Download the latest version now!
> 
> Keep up with the speed of the Web. Download the new Firefox today!

I like "Get the best of the Web with the latest version of Firefox. Download today!"

Can we take that and add something about how their current version is out of date? Maybe something like:

"This version of Firefox is out-of-date. Get the best of the Web with the latest version. Download today!"


I don't love the "out-of-date" so any suggestions there would be great.
(Assignee)

Comment 4

7 years ago
I think to add that and still keep it concise I'd rather rewrite it a bit. One of these, perhaps?

Your Firefox is not up to date. Download the latest version for the best of the Web.

You're not on the latest version of Firefox. Upgrade today to get the best of the Web!

Without the latest version of Firefox you're missing out on the best of the Web. Upgrade now!
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Comment 5

7 years ago
(In reply to comment #4)
> I think to add that and still keep it concise I'd rather rewrite it a bit.

Wise man. 

> One of these, perhaps?
> 
> Your Firefox is not up to date. Download the latest version for the best of
> the Web.
> 
> You're not on the latest version of Firefox. Upgrade today to get the best
> of the Web!

I like this one! Thanks. Closing bug. 
> 
> Without the latest version of Firefox you're missing out on the best of the
> Web. Upgrade now!
Status: NEW → RESOLVED
Last Resolved: 7 years ago
Resolution: --- → FIXED
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