707377 - Rewrite copy for apps-preview login page

Status: VERIFIED FIXED

(addons.mozilla.org Graveyard :: Public Pages, defect, P3)

Description

[Janet Swisher]

Attachment: screenshot of apps-preview login page

The text on the login page of apps-preview.mozilla.org assumes the reader is an existing add-on developer who has a history with AMO. Users of this site are not necessarily already add-on developers. The text needs to be rewritten to address both newcomers and existing add-on devs.

Comment 1

[Janet Swisher]

Suggested replacement:

<p><strong>Welcome to the Apps Developer Preview!</strong></p>

<p>You must log in to access this site. This site uses <a href="https://browserid.org/">BrowserID</a> for logins. The button below activates BrowserID if you haven't used it before, and logs you in if you have.</p>

<p>If you have an existing developer account on Addons.mozilla.org, please note that this site uses a separate database, so it contains no existing AMO data.<p> 

<p><strong>This site is experimental!</strong> Your feedback about this site will help in the development of the Mozilla Labs Apps project. However, please do not assume that your data will be preserved permanently.</p>

Comment 2

[Justin Scott [:fligtar]]

I already corrected the copy to what it should be before launch.

Comment 3

[krupa raj[:krupa]]

verified