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Grammar fault on landing page

VERIFIED FIXED

Status

Participation Infrastructure
Phonebook
VERIFIED FIXED
6 years ago
5 years ago

People

(Reporter: nhirata, Assigned: giorgos)

Tracking

Details

1. go to https://mozillians-dev.allizom.org/en-US/

Actual : "If you're looking for information on your fellow contributors, what they do and how to connect with them, you've come to right place."

Expected: "If you're looking for information on your fellow contributors, what they do and how to connect with them, then you've come to right place. 

Note: ; just look wierd as a list to separate the , having a then in the sentence seems to look better... or just having the sentence broken up might help.
Aye, that's a bad sentence...Matej, any thoughts?
OS: Mac OS X → All
Hardware: x86 → All
Target Milestone: --- → 1.3

Comment 2

6 years ago
I wouldn't say it's necessarily wrong, nor does it sound awkward to me, but I think this is clearer regardless:


Welcome
to the Mozilla community directory.

Here you'll find information on your fellow contributors, what they do and how to connect with them.

Updated

6 years ago
Component: mozillians.org → Phonebook
Product: Websites → Community Tools
QA Contact: mozillians-org → phonebook
Target Milestone: 1.3 → ---
Version: unspecified → other
(Assignee)

Updated

5 years ago
Assignee: nobody → giorgos
Status: NEW → ASSIGNED

Comment 3

5 years ago
Commits pushed to master at https://github.com/mozilla/mozillians

https://github.com/mozilla/mozillians/commit/9e5719963f6f42026f113e78338d4c15dd525941
[fix bug 711323] Change homepage wording.

https://github.com/mozilla/mozillians/commit/a7753717b92b82b5fbf650f8703ce528b0ccd79d
Merge pull request #369 from glogiotatidis/711323

[fix bug 711323] Change homepage wording.

Updated

5 years ago
Status: ASSIGNED → RESOLVED
Last Resolved: 5 years ago
Resolution: --- → FIXED

Comment 4

5 years ago
Note these changes need some l10n love, we will need to update the strings in verbatim.

Updated

5 years ago
Status: RESOLVED → VERIFIED
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