Hey Melissa, can you review and let us know which work, so I can get this puppy online for Brendan, thanks!
Valerie - can you run these past Brendan and see which one he prefers?
Passed the options on to Brendan and awaiting his feedback - will let you know as soon as I hear back from him!
closing this- talked to brendan and tara. brendan doesn't want new copy or a new blog- he wants the design updated on his old blog.