Closed Bug 729559 Opened 13 years ago Closed 13 years ago

Copy for March 2012 email

Categories

(Marketing :: Copy, task)

Product:
Marketing
Component:
Copy
Platform:
x86
macOS
Type:
task
Priority:
Not set
Severity:
normal

Tracking

(Not tracked)

Status:
RESOLVED FIXED

People

(Reporter: ccollins, Assigned: matej)

Details

Here is the March outline for the Firefox & You email https://docs.google.com/document/d/1g97WljhrSgqYhL929ZtYQKRegaUpy0sGDfJhNIs3S2k/edit?hl=en_US It should be pretty straightforward this month - but I'm happy to answer any questions. The email schedule has copy completed by the 29th. Please let us know if that needs to be flexed.
Hey guys, just having a look at the email outline and I have a few comments and questions: Do we know when we'll have more information on the l10n version of the money feature? I know Dan is and will be pretty tied up with MWC over the next couple of weeks, but as it is I'm not sure I have enough to write that version. Just want to make sure that we're all clear that Add-on Sync only works desktop to desktop and mobile to mobile. I think it's still pretty compelling, but we have to be explicit about that so we're not being misleading. As for Winston's comment on the Devices Page feature, I think there's a way to keep it cleanly separated from Add-on Sync. On the other hand, since we have a lot of features this month, I wonder if it's better to combine them into one: lead with the Devices Page, which shows you how Firefox works on all the devices you use, then call out Add-on Sync in particular as a new feature. What do you think? Let me know which donation story we're going with for the Foundation when you know. Is Themes the official new name for Personas? I thought the naming was still ongoing. Thanks!
(In reply to Matej Novak [:matej] from comment #1) > Hey guys, just having a look at the email outline and I have a few comments > and questions: > > Do we know when we'll have more information on the l10n version of the money > feature? I know Dan is and will be pretty tied up with MWC over the next > couple of weeks, but as it is I'm not sure I have enough to write that > version. Hi Matej, I've been working with Dan - we'll have the "official" list by March 1. We've also asked our contributors to take a look at the add ons and recommend some by March 5. Though from my early info - I'm speculating that this may be an EN only feature. > > Just want to make sure that we're all clear that Add-on Sync only works > desktop to desktop and mobile to mobile. I think it's still pretty > compelling, but we have to be explicit about that so we're not being > misleading. Thank you for that - that wasn't specifically called out in the creative brief, so please include that information. > > As for Winston's comment on the Devices Page feature, I think there's a way > to keep it cleanly separated from Add-on Sync. On the other hand, since we > have a lot of features this month, I wonder if it's better to combine them > into one: lead with the Devices Page, which shows you how Firefox works on > all the devices you use, then call out Add-on Sync in particular as a new > feature. What do you think? I'll defer to Winston/Jess/you to decide. I just want us to be clear - and we had talked about moving Devices to April if we couldn't make it clear. > > Let me know which donation story we're going with for the Foundation when > you know. I'll check with Ben today > > Is Themes the official new name for Personas? I thought the naming was still > ongoing. That's the direction Kristin and Dan Mills gave us in a recent email discussion. We thought it was still ongoing as well. > > Thanks!
Update: Added suggested copy from Ben for Foundation to the outline document Added localized add ons for finance piece for BR and DE - I believe March 5 is the deadline to hear back from the other locales.
Matej - per comment 1, fine with combining if you think that's the best approach. Thanks!
Hey all, I'm working on updating the Email Calendar Timeline to better reflect the actual process we undergo each month and give absolute final deadlines - as always, if you can get it done earlier, that's awesome. :) (Carmen & Winston, we can chat about this during the content meeting tomorrow.) For March's content, Matej, the goal is to get the draft done by Monday March 5th. Final done by March 8th. I'll send to localizers on March 9th. This should give Matej a few days wiggle room for us to send him localized addons for Finance by March 5th to incorporate into the final by March 8th. Let me know if you have any questions. I'll update the full document soon. Thanks! Jess
Hi all. You can find a first draft of the newsletter here: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1DkmBwHtIPTlQE4FdrJL9iyqhwHYM--qUbzZIyLRRbNI/edit A few notes: • I haven't written the l10n version of the finance story since we haven't heard back from all the locales and Carmen indicated there was a chance this would be only en-US. Shouldn't be too hard to write up, though. • Still missing featured add-ons this month. • I've tried to include all the links I can, but a few are still missing. Sorry if the links make it hard to read. • I've included a few questions in the actual doc as well. Other than that, it should all be there.
> • I haven't written the l10n version of the finance story since we haven't > heard back from all the locales and Carmen indicated there was a chance this > would be only en-US. Shouldn't be too hard to write up, though. Each of the locales picked a few of the add-ons that would work - heard from the last one today. Added this to the outline doc. > > • Still missing featured add-ons this month. Approved end of last week, thanks for reminding me to add them here. :)
OK, everything is up to date in the gdoc: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1DkmBwHtIPTlQE4FdrJL9iyqhwHYM--qUbzZIyLRRbNI/edit Any other changes or feedback?
Reading through this morning and will have some comments before end of business. Thanks, Matej!
I see that people have gone in and made some edits and left comments. Is it ready for me to go back and make changes?
Hi Matej. Yeah. Feel free to ping me or Carmen with questions... or if comments aren't clear.
OK, all set. Let me know if you have any other questions or comments.
Thanks!
Status: NEW → RESOLVED
Closed: 13 years ago
Resolution: --- → FIXED
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