738611 - [bedrock] Port /firefox/fx/ page to bedrock

Status: VERIFIED FIXED

(www.mozilla.org :: General, defect)

Comment 1

[Steven Garrity [:sgarrity]]

Setup this page on stage (20241b109df5a5e23e8597d11d07ea48abeb8f88).

Still needs some copy for the "Try Firefox Beta" promo (notice the latin text).

Comment 2

[Matej Novak [:matej]]

Posting all the copy below since there were some small tweaks across the board, including some changes to capitalization in a few places. Might be best to reflow all the copy, just to be safe. I can have another look once it's done, too. Just ping me.


Your Firefox is up to date.
Now get it on all your devices.
Find out how >>

Get Firefox
If you need a fresh new copy, you can get it here:
[BUTTON]

Try Firefox Beta
Help refine and polish the newest features almost ready for prime time.
Download now >>

More features, more info
Get the latest Firefox tips and tricks every month in our <i>Firefox & You</i> newsletter.
Sign up today >>

Comment 3

[Steven Garrity [:sgarrity]]

These text updates have been made. Thanks Matej. I did have to tighten up the headline spacing/font a bit to fit the "More features, more info" headline one line, but I think it works.

Ready for qa.

Comment 4

[Matej Novak [:matej]]

Copy looks great, but could we try to break the lines a little differently so we're not left with one word on the last line? The following are just suggestions since it might look different in Georgia:


If you need a fresh new copy, you can 
get it here:

| OR EVEN:                      |
| If you need a fresh new copy, |
| you can get it here           | 


Help refine and polish 
the newest features almost 
ready for prime time.


Get the latest Firefox tips 
and tricks every month in 
our Firefox & You newsletter.

Comment 5

[[github robot]]

Commit pushed to dev at https://github.com/mozilla/bedrock

https://github.com/mozilla/bedrock/commit/50476eff44fb42e9153c4f81fc0a080562024895
Tidy up line-breaks for Bug 738611

Comment 6

[Steven Garrity [:sgarrity]]

ready for qa

Comment 7

[raymond [:retornam] (inactive)]

qa-verified-trunk http://www-dev.allizom.org/b/en-US/firefox/fx/

Comment 8

[Matej Novak [:matej]]

We've still got "newsletter" on its own line in the third promo. Can we update that?

Get the latest Firefox tips 
and tricks every month in 
our Firefox & You newsletter.

Thanks.

Comment 9

[[github robot]]

Commit pushed to dev at https://github.com/mozilla/bedrock

https://github.com/mozilla/bedrock/commit/6e3e8fe72308b0ecbd11e11cc0c3797804876da3
Adjust line breaks (Bug 738611)

Comment 10

[raymond [:retornam] (inactive)]

qa-verified-trunk http://www-dev.allizom.org/b/en-US/firefox/fx/

Comment 11

[Matej Novak [:matej]]

Ty and I were just looking at this page and noticed some issues (e.g. "Firefox" in the download button should be the wordmark, not written in Georgia). I've added him and will let him comment in more detail.

Comment 12

[Steven Garrity [:sgarrity]]

(In reply to Matej Novak [:matej] from comment #11)
> Ty and I were just looking at this page and noticed some issues (e.g.
> "Firefox" in the download button should be the wordmark, not written in
> Georgia). I've added him and will let him comment in more detail.

This was an intentional deviation from the mockups that I had discussed with smartell a while back. Having 'real text' rather than text-as-an-image in the download button ensures that the download button is immediately visible when the page loads. Can this stay as is?

It's the same style as the current live website (with slight tweaks to the background color/gradient/border-radius to match the new style).

Comment 13

[John Slater]

Yep, it's ok to keep the button text as is. We've done it that way for a pretty long time for the reasons noted in comment #12.

Comment 14

[raymond [:retornam] (inactive)]

Page looks good. Only thing broken is the newsletter but that is going to be fixed in another bug so


qa-verified-trunk http://www-dev.allizom.org/b/en-US/firefox/fx/

Comment 15

[John Slater]

Sorry to reopen this, but Steven had asked in IRC about having two newsletter promos in close proximity (the one in the lower right and the footer one), so I figured this was the best place to address it.

First, thanks for calling that out. Second, if it's indeed a fairly trivial thing to fix (as noted in IRC) then our preferred solution is to keep the email footer as is and change the promo in the lower right.

The new lower right promo should link to http://www.mozilla.org/contribute/. Here's the text:
Get involved
Volunteer with Firefox and help us build a brighter future for the Web.

Also, the newsletter signup should just say Get Firefox updates (vs Get Mozilla Firefox updates).

Thanks!

Comment 16

[John Slater]

Revised text (with the link this time):

Join the team
Volunteer with Firefox and help us build a brighter future for the Web.

(link) Get involved

Comment 17

[[github robot]]

Commit pushed to dev at https://github.com/mozilla/bedrock

https://github.com/mozilla/bedrock/commit/1119b1ae02b6ffabb3e576f3e42f86f79862210e
Updates to style and content for /fx page
(Bug 738611)

Comment 18

[Steven Garrity [:sgarrity]]

Updated styles a bit based on feedback from Lee, updated wording/promo based on John's comments.

Comment 19

[raymond [:retornam] (inactive)]

qa-verified-trunk http://www-dev.allizom.org/b/en-US/firefox/fx/

Comment 20

[raymond [:retornam] (inactive)]

verified fixed https://www.mozilla.org/en-US/firefox/fx/