Closed Bug 754400 Opened 12 years ago Closed 12 years ago

implement beta promo in Tabzilla

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(Websites :: Tabzilla, defect)

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VERIFIED FIXED

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(Reporter: sgarrity, Assigned: sgarrity)

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+++ This bug was initially created as a clone of Bug #751427 +++

Implementation bug for the tabzilla promo portion of Bug 751427. Designs/copy in Bug 751426
I've got this implemented locally. I can't quite get the HTML text to flow as nicely as the PSD. The text is running onto five lines. Screenshot attached.
What's the best way to fix? Shorten the copy?
The copy was actually changed to this:

Download Firefox Beta, provide feedback and help make our next version even more awesome.

Will that fit? Otherwise I could probably shorten it more.
There's probably also an opportunity to make the Download Firefox Beta slightly bigger as well if the copy is short enough. 

slight tweak, can we say
help make the next version of Firefox  (rather than make our next version?)
I was trying to avoid saying "Firefox" twice in a short line, but I guess it doesn't look that bad. It does add words, though, so I'm providing two options below, in case the longer one doesn't fit.

I'll let someone else make the call on the type size, but that's not how we've done these promos in the past.


Download Firefox Beta, provide feedback and help make the next version of Firefox more awesome.

Download Firefox Beta and help us refine and polish the next great version of Firefox.
Matej, I went with this version:

> Download Firefox Beta,
> provide feedback and
> help make the next
> version of Firefox even
> more awesome.

Note that I added back the "even", as the word 'awesome' was ending up alone on the last line anyhow. This seems to work well if it's ok with you.
Sounds good to me, thanks Steven.
qa-verified-trunk http://www-dev.allizom.org/en-US/
Status: NEW → RESOLVED
Closed: 12 years ago
Resolution: --- → FIXED
This is in production now.
verified fixed https://www.mozilla.org/en-US/
Status: RESOLVED → VERIFIED
Component: www.mozilla.org → General
Product: Websites → www.mozilla.org
Component: General → Tabzilla
Product: www.mozilla.org → Websites
Target Milestone: 2.5 → 1.5
Sorry for the bugspam -- the Target Milestore was set unexpectedly.
Target Milestone: 1.5 → ---
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