824787 - [FxD Product Pages - Updates] Copy change on /features page

Status: RESOLVED FIXED

(Marketing :: Copy, task)

Description

[Laura Forrest]

URL: http://www.mozilla.org/en-US/firefox/features/

Advanced Security Section:
Change this: 
Automated Updates         
Firefox will automatically let you know when there’s a new  version available, so you can make sure your browser is always  up-to-date with the latest and greatest security fixes.

To something like this:
Automatic Updates         
Firefox updates itself so you can rest assured that your browser is always up-to-date with the latest and greatest security fixes. There's no action required on your part 

(change slightly, I took that from the Chrome page...)
https://www.google.com/intl/en/chrome/browser/features.html#security

Timing: by 1/4/2013, pending your PTO

Comment 1

[Matej Novak [:matej]]

How's this?

Automatic Updates         
Firefox updates itself automatically so you can rest assured that your browser is always up to date with the latest and greatest security fixes. And the best part is, you don't have to do a thing.

Comment 2

[Laura Forrest]

(In reply to Matej Novak [:matej] from comment #1)
> How's this?
> 
> Automatic Updates         
> Firefox updates itself automatically so you can rest assured that your
> browser is always up to date with the latest and greatest security fixes.
> And the best part is, you don't have to do a thing.

+1.

Comment 3

[[github robot]]

Commits pushed to master at https://github.com/mozilla/bedrock

https://github.com/mozilla/bedrock/commit/a1e4b13ab5ddb584735368fec8dbb2d11f77510e
Bug 824787 Copy change on /firefox/features page

https://github.com/mozilla/bedrock/commit/ed8b4cd9aae1c228006d48fe680ba3f8c275c5e1
Merge pull request #574 from sgarrity/bug-824789-features-text

Bug 824787 Copy change on /firefox/features page