Closed Bug 834838 Opened 10 years ago Closed 10 years ago

Copy changes for the MT auth screen

Categories

(Marketplace Graveyard :: Payments/Refunds, defect, P2)

defect

Tracking

(Not tracked)

VERIFIED FIXED
2013-01-31

People

(Reporter: krupa.mozbugs, Assigned: keir)

References

Details

(Whiteboard: u=patron p=1)

Attachments

(1 file)

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steps to reproduce:
1. Launch marketplace-dev on your unagi phone and log in with a new Persona
account.
2. Navigate to the details page for 'Private Yacht'
3. Click on the purchase button
4. Create/Set up PIN
5. When prompted to provide your phone #, type in your US number.
6. Notice the copy in the screen where you are supposed to enter the code you just received via SMS

Copy changes:
1. We've sent a PIN code to <phone number>, once you receive it enter it below.
- Do we want to use PIN to mean the payments PIN and the bango PIN? Can we use something else like "code" or "secret" or "ID"?
- For readability, please break the sentence into two thusly- "We've sent a {PIN} code to <phone number>. Once you receive it, please enter it below."

2. Click here if you do not receive a PIN and we'll resend it.
- It is not clear what the user is supposed to click. Was "here" supposed to be a hyperlink?
- May be change "..if you do not receive.." to "if you did not receive.."?

3. Typo in error message
Assignee: nobody → keir
Priority: -- → P2
Whiteboard: u=patron p=1
Target Milestone: --- → 2013-01-31
> 
> 3. Typo in error message

Which error message?
Version: 1.0 → 1.1
complete
Status: NEW → RESOLVED
Closed: 10 years ago
Resolution: --- → FIXED
This page was completely re-hauled with UX input. We don't show any success message after the bango PIN is sent out.
Status: RESOLVED → VERIFIED
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