834838 - Copy changes for the MT auth screen

Status: VERIFIED FIXED

(Marketplace Graveyard :: Payments/Refunds, defect, P2)

Description

[krupa raj[:krupa]]

Attachment: screenshot

steps to reproduce:
1. Launch marketplace-dev on your unagi phone and log in with a new Persona
account.
2. Navigate to the details page for 'Private Yacht'
3. Click on the purchase button
4. Create/Set up PIN
5. When prompted to provide your phone #, type in your US number.
6. Notice the copy in the screen where you are supposed to enter the code you just received via SMS

Copy changes:
1. We've sent a PIN code to <phone number>, once you receive it enter it below.
- Do we want to use PIN to mean the payments PIN and the bango PIN? Can we use something else like "code" or "secret" or "ID"?
- For readability, please break the sentence into two thusly- "We've sent a {PIN} code to <phone number>. Once you receive it, please enter it below."

2. Click here if you do not receive a PIN and we'll resend it.
- It is not clear what the user is supposed to click. Was "here" supposed to be a hyperlink?
- May be change "..if you do not receive.." to "if you did not receive.."?

3. Typo in error message

Comment 1

[Keir Kettle]

> 
> 3. Typo in error message

Which error message?

Comment 2

[Steve Ruston]

complete

Comment 3

[krupa raj[:krupa]]

This page was completely re-hauled with UX input. We don't show any success message after the bango PIN is sent out.