843289 - [l10n: mr] updated newsletter.lang file for www.mozilla.org

Status: RESOLVED FIXED

(www.mozilla.org :: L10N, defect)

Description

[Aniket Deshpande]

(Attach your updated newsletter.lang file to this bug or indicate the revision number of your commit in SVN)

I'm attaching the updated newsletter.lang file. please see if there are any corrections.I also pointed out that there are a few grammatical errors in the file which i have not corrected.

Comment 1

[Aniket Deshpande]

Attachment: newsletter.lang

Comment 2

[Aniket Deshpande]

I also suggest that the keyword 'mozilla' should be written in english only.

Comment 3

[Pascal Chevrel (relman team) -> :pascalc]

Not a security sensitive bug :)

Comment 4

[Pascal Chevrel (relman team) -> :pascalc]

Attachment: aniket changes as a patch

Hi Aniekt,

First of all, thanks for the translation :)

I am reattaching your translation as a patch to the newsletter.lang we currently have.

Note that the lines starting with a # are localization comments and should not be modified, they give hints on the context where these string are used.

Also, I removed the {ok} tag at the end of one of your translation, this is a tag used to indicate that your translation for a string is the same as the english text and that this is not a bug. Since you have actually translated the string, the {ok} is actually not needed.

Comment 5

[Pascal Chevrel (relman team) -> :pascalc]

Comment on attachment 716544 [details] [diff] [review]
aniket changes as a patch

Sandeep being the locale owner for Marahati, let's ask him for a review of your patch :)

Comment 6

[sandeep shedmake]

Comment on attachment 716544 [details] [diff] [review]
aniket changes as a patch

- not consistent with existing localization of newsletter.lang
- localization for entry "YOUR EMAIL HERE" could be more precise

Hence, patch not accepted.

~/Sandeep

Comment 7

[sandeep shedmake]

(In reply to sandeep shedmake from comment #6)
> Comment on attachment 716544 [details] [diff] [review]
> aniket changes as a patch
> 
> - not consistent with existing localization of newsletter.lang
> - localization for entry "YOUR EMAIL HERE" could be more precise
> 

From Comment 0, Comment 1, Comment 2,

for terminology and consistency in newsletter.lang localization, refer: http://pastebin.mozilla.org/2166179

> Hence, patch not accepted.
>

Revised l10n fix (for updated newsletter.lang) available via bug 843960


-Sandeep
irc.mozilla.org nick 'sandeeps' at #mozilla.in,#l10n

Comment 8

[Aniket Deshpande]

Attachment: corrected newsletter.lang

I have corrected the typographical and grammatical errors.please see if there are any corrections.

Comment 9

[Pascal Chevrel (relman team) -> :pascalc]

Attachment: updated patch

Comment 10

[Pascal Chevrel (relman team) -> :pascalc]

(In reply to sandeep shedmake from comment #7)
> Revised l10n fix (for updated newsletter.lang) available via bug 843960

Sandeep, aniket provided an updated translation.

Comment 12

[sandeep shedmake]

Comment on attachment 717060 [details] [diff] [review]
updated patch

Review of attachment 717060 [details] [diff] [review]:
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;Please read the Mozilla Privacy Policy and agree by checking the box.
-कृपया मोझीला प्राइवसि पॉलिसि वाचा व बॉक्स् तपासून मान्य करा.
+कृपया  मोझीला प्राईवसी  पॉलिसी  वाचा व बॉक्स् तपासून मान्य करा.
#remove extra space
#कृपया मोझीला प्राईवसी पॉलिसी वाचा व बॉक्स् तपासून मान्य करा.
 

 ;I agree to the <a href="%s">Privacy Policy</a>
-मला <a href="%s">प्राइवसि पॉलिसि</a> मान्य आहे
+मला <a href="%s">प्राईवसी पॉलिसी</a> मान्य आहे


 ;We look forward to soon begin sharing tips &amp; tricks on getting the most out of Firefox, as well as exciting news about Mozilla and how we’re working to create a better Web.
-फायरफॉक्स्चा उत्तम वापर करण्यासाठी टिप व युक्ती यांचा वापर, तसेच मोझीलाविषयी नविन ऐकण्यासाठी व वेबला चांगले कसे बनविता येईल याबाबत आमचे प्रयत्न राहतील.
+फायरफॉक्सचा उत्तम उपयोग करण्यासाठी टिप व युक्ती यांचा वापर, तसेच मोझीलाविषयी नविन बातम्या व वेबला चांगलं बनवण्यासाठी आम्ही कसे प्रयत्न आहोत.
# better localization
# फायरफॉक्सचा उत्तम उपयोग करण्यासाठी टिप व युक्ती यांचा वापर, तसेच मोझीलाविषयी नविन बातम्या व वेबला चांगलं बनवण्यासाठी आम्ही प्रयत्नशील आहोत.


 ;Subscribe to monthly updates and keep current with Mozilla news, including the latest tips and tricks for getting the most out of your Firefox browser. It’s the perfect way for us to keep in touch!
-मासिक सुधारणांसाठी सबस्क्राइब करा व Mozilla न्यूजसह अवगत रहा, फायरफॉक्स ब्राऊजरपासून सर्वाधिक प्राप्त करण्यासाठी नविन टिप्स् व युक्ती समाविष्टीत. आमच्याशी संपर्कात राहण्यासाठी उत्तम मार्ग!　
+मासिक सुधारणांसाठी सबस्क्राइब करा व मोझीला समाचारासह अवगत रहा, फायरफॉक्स ब्राऊझरपासून सर्वाधिक प्राप्त करण्यासाठी नविन टिप्स् व युक्ती समाविष्ट.हा आमच्याशी संपर्कात राहण्यासाठी उत्तम मार्ग आहे!
# missing space before start of second sentence
# मासिक सुधारणांसाठी सबस्क्राइब करा व मोझीला समाचारासह अवगत रहा, फायरफॉक्स ब्राऊझरपासून सर्वाधिक प्राप्त करण्यासाठी नविन टिप्स् व युक्ती समाविष्ट. हा आमच्याशी संपर्कात राहण्यासाठी उत्तम मार्ग आहे!


 ;Learn about the hottest new add-ons and features for Firefox mobile.
-फायरफॉक्स मोबाईलकरीता नवीन ॲडऑन्स् व गुणविशेषविषयी अधिक शिका.
+फायरफॉक्स मोबाईलकरीता नवीन ॲडऑन्स् व गुणविशेष विषयी अधिक शिका.
# better localization
# फायरफॉक्स मोबाईलकरीता नवीन ॲडऑन्स् व गुणविशेषांविषयी अधिक शिका.


 ;Beta News
-बिटा समाचार
+बीटा समाचार
# whats wrong with बिटा? if 'Beeta' then 'बीटा' could be better match


 ;Unsubscribe
-सबस्क्राइब अशक्य व्हा
+सदस्यता समाप्त करा
# better localization
# सदस्यता बंद करा

 ;Save Preferences
-पसंती साठवा
+पसंती सुरक्षित ठेवा
# enusre FUEL compliancy:
# http://svn.fedorahosted.org/svn/fuel/language/mr/terminology/desktop/fuel-desktop-mr.po
# http://svn.fedorahosted.org/svn/fuel/language/mr/terminology/mobile/fuel-mobile-mr.po
# पसंती साठवा


 ;You've been unsubscribed.
-तुम्ही सबस्क्राइब अशक्य झालात.
+तुमची सदस्यता समाप्त केली गेली आहे.
# better localization (minimal words)
# तुमची सदस्यता समाप्त झाली.


 ;Your content wasn't relevant to me.
-तुमची अंतर्भुत माहिती माझ्याशी संबंधित नाही.
+तुमची माहिती माझ्या साठी अयोग्य होती.
# better localization
# तुमची माहिती माझ्यासाठी अयोग्य होती.


 ;I'm keeping in touch with Mozilla on Facebook and Twitter instead.
-त्याऐवजी मी फेसबूक व ट्विटरवर मोझिलासह संपर्क करतो.
+त्याऐवजी मी फ़ेसबुक व ट्विटरवर मोझीलासह संपर्क करतो.
# Brand names in mozilla - http://www.mozilla.org/en-US/styleguide/communications/translation/
# Nukta (फ़ेसबुक), is not used in Marathi - http://coe.maharashtra.gov.in/images/content/pdf/ScriptGrammarMarathi.pdf


 # This is a default placeholder for a subscription field on other pages than /newsletter/
 ;YOUR EMAIL HERE
-तुमचा ईमेल
+तुमचा ई-मेल   
# ensure FUEL compliancy
# तुमचा ईमेल

Comment 13

[sandeep shedmake]

From Comment 8 and Comment 10,

Aniket,

Thanks for the patch. Patch review done. 

Implement the said correction(s) within the comment and re-submit a revised patch containing the said correction(s).


-Sandeep

Comment 14

[Aniket Deshpande]

Attachment: updated corrections in newsletter.lang

फायरफॉक्स changed to Firefox and मोझीला to Mozilla.
Reason:A note on branding  -
       Our brand names do not get localized, translated or transcribed.    Anything that’s a proper noun with a leading capital letter (Firefox, Marketplace, etc.) remains in the original English and is always spelled out in Roman characters. All other names (add-ons, themes, etc.) should be localized as usual.

       http://www.mozilla.org/en-US/styleguide/communications/translation/

Comment 15

[sandeep shedmake]

From Comment 13 and Comment 14,

Ankiet, could you submit a revised patch?

To create a patch follow http://pastebin.mozilla.org/2176927.


Looking forward...


-Sandeep

Comment 16

[Aniket Deshpande]

Attachment: patch

Hi Sandeep,
    submitting the revised patch. please review.

Aniket.

Comment 17

[sandeep shedmake]

Comment on attachment 718296 [details] [diff] [review]
patch

Review of attachment 718296 [details] [diff] [review]:
-----------------------------------------------------------------

++ Review Done.


Aniket, patch looks good. Thanks!!

~/Sandeep

Comment 18

[Aniket Deshpande]

Thanks Sandeep.

Regards,
Aniket.

Comment 19

[Pascal Chevrel (relman team) -> :pascalc]

Sandeep, can you commit Aniket's patch to trunk please? Thanks

Comment 20

[sandeep shedmake]

Adding         bug843289_FIXED_l10n_updates.patch
Transmitting file data .
Committed revision 113531.
[sshedmak@dhcp193-69 mr]$ echo $?
0

Comment 21

[Pascal Chevrel (relman team) -> :pascalc]

I forgot to close the bug, Sandeep note that you can close bugs yourself as well :) Thanks guys

Comment 22

[Aniket Deshpande]

Thank you Pascal. :)