902279 - [b2g][Marketing][hr]: FFOS Consumer Messaging Doc

Status: RESOLVED FIXED

(Mozilla Localizations :: hr / Croatian, defect)

Description

[Peiying Mo [:CocoMo]]

Hi Mihovil,

This project contains some critical marketing messages to be used on website, product and marketing campaign collateral by Mozilla and its mobile partners.   If some expressions are already used on the web or else where, try to leverage or re-use them.  

Reference Material:
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Consumer site: http://www.mozilla.org/en-US/firefox/os/
Partner site: http://www.mozilla.org/en-US/firefox/partners/
Slogan: https://bugzilla.mozilla.org/show_bug.cgi?id=893094 

Scope of Work: 
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1). Localize the Word doc into your native language
2). PDF version for reference: https://bugzilla.mozilla.org/attachment.cgi?id=786416&action=edit
3). Download the Word doc: https://bugzilla.mozilla.org/attachment.cgi?id=786637&action=edit
4). Deliveries:
A). Once it is translated and reviewed among peers if necessary, upload the Word file to the bug assigned for your locale.  
4). Save a PDF version and upload it to the bug assigned to you. 

If you are not the owner of the task, please triage it as soon as possible.  

Thank you,
Peiying

Comment 1

[Mihovil Stanic [:Mikeyy - L10n HR]]

Attachment: Firefox OS — Consumer messaging doc (copy deck).docx

Half translated, please check it and continue translation.

Comment 2

[Mihovil Stanic [:Mikeyy - L10n HR]]

Translated half or more then half of document. Please review it, correct mistakes and continue translation.

Comment 3

[Peiying Mo [:CocoMo]]

Please make sure to translate text in brackets [xxxx] as well as they are the suggestions for where messages can be used.

Comment 4

[Peiying Mo [:CocoMo]]

let us know how this has been progressing.

Comment 5

[Mihovil Stanic [:Mikeyy - L10n HR]]

Attachment: Firefox OS — Consumer messaging doc (copy deck).docx

Fully translated. Please review it.

Also, in english part there is a bug in very last sentence:
"When you use choose Firefox OS,..."
use choose --- I think only one of these words should be here, not both.

Comment 6

[Peiying Mo [:CocoMo]]

Hi Mihovil, Thanks for pointing out the mistake.  We will make sure to fix the English version.  And thanks for completing the translation in a timely manner.

Comment 7

[Mihovil Stanic [:Mikeyy - L10n HR]]

I would feel more comfortable if Saša or Niko could check translation.
I watched for spelling mistakes and translation quality, but there are always errors, especially in full sentence translations.

So please, don't publish that until at least one of them takes a quick look at it.

Comment 8

[Sasa Tekovic]

Attachment: Firefox OS — Consumer messaging doc (copy deck) - version 2.0

Hi,

I'm attaching new version of the document with minor improvements. I've removed English text, so this version of the document contains only Croatian translation.

Cheers!

Comment 9

[Matej Novak [:matej]]

Thanks for your help here. Just one thing: I noticed that Marketplace has been translated while things like Firefox and Facebook are kept in the original. Marketplace is a product name just like Firefox and should be treated the same. Could you update that please?

Once that's done, could you also attach a PDF version to the bug?

Thanks.

Comment 10

[Matej Novak [:matej]]

(In reply to Mihovil Stanic [:Mikeyy - L10n HR] from comment #5)
> Created attachment 788505 [details]
> Firefox OS — Consumer messaging doc (copy deck).docx
> 
> Fully translated. Please review it.
> 
> Also, in english part there is a bug in very last sentence:
> "When you use choose Firefox OS,..."
> use choose --- I think only one of these words should be here, not both.

Thanks for catching that. It should be "When you choose Firefox OS,..."

Comment 11

[Mihovil Stanic [:Mikeyy - L10n HR]]

Where we were translating those "Get app" buttons for FF marketplace we translated marketplace there as "tržnica" or "trgovina". Later we decided we will use "trgovina" so I translated it same here.

Firefox is a name, brand, marketplace isn't, at least not from my point of view.

Comment 12

[Matej Novak [:matej]]

Marketplace is a brand name, just like Firefox. We treat it that way in all communications and executions. That's why it has its own logo and wordmark (and section in the style guide: http://www.mozilla.org/en-US/styleguide/identity/marketplace/branding/)

None of our brand names get localized and Marketplace is the same. You can also refer to "A Note on Branding" here: http://www.mozilla.org/en-US/styleguide/communications/translation/

Thanks.