904237 - Content updates to Persona descriptions, focus on sign-in-with-email

Status: VERIFIED FIXED

(www.mozilla.org :: Pages & Content, defect)

Description

[Ryan Feeley [:rfeeley]]

The content on the mozilla/Persona site needs to reflect the "sign in with email" focus. Usability testing revealed that users need help forming a mental model, and making the text more straightforward is one way we are trying to achieve this.

Comment 1

[Jennifer Bertsch [:jbertsch]]

Hi Ryan-

Are you referring to this page?  http://www.mozilla.org/en-US/persona/

Thx,
Jen

Comment 2

[Ryan Feeley [:rfeeley]]

Hi Jennifer, Yes, that's the spot.

I've even submitted the changes into Github.

https://github.com/mozilla/bedrock/pull/1154
https://github.com/mozilla/bedrock/pull/1153

Let me know if I'm pulling said request correctly.

Ryan

Comment 3

[Steven Garrity [:sgarrity]]

The two PRs in comment #2 were merged into one: https://github.com/mozilla/bedrock/pull/1160

I also filed Bug 905697 to wrap all of the strings on the Persona pages for l10n.

Comment 4

[[github robot]]

Commits pushed to master at https://github.com/mozilla/bedrock

https://github.com/mozilla/bedrock/commit/a90979b8fd77c10ec0f2489a668924f43306c753
Bug 904237  Update persona.html and persona.less
Copy changes to focus on sign-in-with-email behavior of Persona
Made relying party example block generic, named it rp-example (from previous RP used trovebox)

https://github.com/mozilla/bedrock/commit/634dd27928bc2376a0f9d094759e43e39ec7dac7
Merge pull request #1160 from sgarrity/persona-updates

Bug 904237 Update persona.html and persona.less

Comment 5

[Stephen Donner [:stephend] Not actively reading bugmail]

Marking as FIXED; this went to prod.

Comment 6

[Stephen Donner [:stephend] Not actively reading bugmail]

Verified FIXED on http://www.mozilla.org/en-US/persona/