Improve copy for X-Ray Goggles relaunch

RESOLVED FIXED

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RESOLVED FIXED
5 years ago
5 years ago

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(Reporter: cassie, Assigned: erikad)

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(Whiteboard: uxdesign, frontend)

(Reporter)

Description

5 years ago
Erikad mentioned she thought the copy could be improved (be made less confusing) on the new Goggles page. https://goggles.webmaker.org/

If we can update this today, that would be ideal – we're launching this to present on tomorrow's community call (but it is not a launch-blocker).

For one, the button repeats the page heading, and I think we can do better than that - be more specific/actionable on the button, such as "Try X-Ray Goggles now"

Erika, other thoughts?
(Assignee)

Comment 1

5 years ago
My overall comment is that the text needs to be simplified and spell out the steps more. Remember that the Goggles are intended for beginners. I've started hacking the text here: https://etherpad.mozilla.org/v2-copy-goggles

Is there any way that the image can be a .jpg?  I don't think the average beginner recognizes that a PNG is an image.
(Assignee)

Comment 2

5 years ago
Marking this as closed. Feel free to re-open if we decide to revisit the text.
Status: NEW → RESOLVED
Last Resolved: 5 years ago
Resolution: --- → FIXED
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