Closed
Bug 906708
Opened 11 years ago
Closed 11 years ago
Improve copy for X-Ray Goggles relaunch
Categories
(Webmaker Graveyard :: webmaker.org, defect)
Tracking
(Not tracked)
RESOLVED
FIXED
People
(Reporter: cassie, Assigned: erikad)
Details
(Whiteboard: uxdesign, frontend)
Erikad mentioned she thought the copy could be improved (be made less confusing) on the new Goggles page. https://goggles.webmaker.org/
If we can update this today, that would be ideal – we're launching this to present on tomorrow's community call (but it is not a launch-blocker).
For one, the button repeats the page heading, and I think we can do better than that - be more specific/actionable on the button, such as "Try X-Ray Goggles now"
Erika, other thoughts?
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Comment 1•11 years ago
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My overall comment is that the text needs to be simplified and spell out the steps more. Remember that the Goggles are intended for beginners. I've started hacking the text here: https://etherpad.mozilla.org/v2-copy-goggles
Is there any way that the image can be a .jpg? I don't think the average beginner recognizes that a PNG is an image.
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Comment 2•11 years ago
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Marking this as closed. Feel free to re-open if we decide to revisit the text.
Status: NEW → RESOLVED
Closed: 11 years ago
Resolution: --- → FIXED
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