"Tips and Tricks" Copy Approval for Snippets on lower-visibility locales

RESOLVED FIXED

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Marketing
Copy
RESOLVED FIXED
4 years ago
4 years ago

People

(Reporter: Jean Collings, Assigned: matej)

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(Reporter)

Description

4 years ago
>>Project/Request Title:
"Tips and Tricks" Copy Approval for Snippets on lower-visibility locales

>>Project Overview:
Desktop retention and education for tier 2 locales (part of the tips and tricks theme)

>>Creative Specs & Deliverables:
Copy approval:

1) Is Firefox your go-to browser? If you want to set Firefox as the default browser that opens links when you click on them, here’s how. <link> https://support.mozilla.org/kb/how-make-web-links-open-firefox-default

2) Firefox has a feature that lets you tell websites not to track your browsing behavior. Learn what tracking is, how the feature works and how to turn it on. <link> https://support.mozilla.org/kb/how-do-i-turn-do-not-track-feature

3) Want to personalize your Firefox? Add-ons can help add extra functionality or style. Try a time-saving toolbar, a weather notifier, a themed look and more. Choose from thousands! <link> https://addons.mozilla.org/firefox/

4) Did you know you can customize Firefox using toolbars and buttons tricks? Make Firefox work the way you do.
<Link> http://support.mozilla.com/kb/how-do-i-customize-toolbars

>>Launch Date:
2013-11-25

>>Creative Due Date:
2013-11-11

>>Mozilla Goal:
Firefox Deskop

>>Points of Contact:
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Comment 1

4 years ago
Matej, 

Can you take a look and give Jean some feedback? No rush - needs to be done by Nov 11. 

Thanks!
Assignee: jbalaco → Mnovak
Status: NEW → ASSIGNED
Due Date: 2013-11-25 → 2013-11-11
Component: Design → Copy
(Assignee)

Comment 2

4 years ago
I'm on it. Thanks.
Due Date: 2013-11-11 → 2013-11-25
(Assignee)

Updated

4 years ago
Due Date: 2013-11-25 → 2013-11-11
(Assignee)

Comment 3

4 years ago
Here are my revisions:

1) Is Firefox your go-to browser? <a>Make it the default to open links when you click on them.</a>
<link> https://support.mozilla.org/kb/how-make-web-links-open-firefox-default

2) Firefox lets you tell websites not to track your browsing behavior. <a>Learn about tracking, including how to use our Do Not Track feature.</a>
<link> https://support.mozilla.org/kb/how-do-i-turn-do-not-track-feature

3) Use add-ons to personalize Firefox, add features or show off your style. Try a time-saving toolbar, a weather notifier, a theme or <a>choose from thousands more!</a>
<link> https://addons.mozilla.org/firefox/

4) There are lots of tricks that let you customize Firefox using toolbars and buttons. <a>Make your browser work the way you do.</a>
<Link> http://support.mozilla.com/kb/how-do-i-customize-toolbars

Let me know if you have any questions or comments.
(Reporter)

Comment 4

4 years ago
Hi Majej,
Thanks for the feedback. Some of these are about a line too long (trying to reduce the character count to roughly about 100 characters). Let me know if you're fine with these shortened versions:

1) Fine the way it is
2) Firefox lets you tell websites not to track your browsing behavior. <a> Learn how to use our Do Not Track Feature. </a>
3) Use add-ons to personalize Firefox, add features or show off your style. <a> Choose from thousands more!</a>
4) Fine the way it is

Thank you.
(Assignee)

Comment 5

4 years ago
I have just a couple of small edits to the versions in comment 4. Here's the final list:

1) Is Firefox your go-to browser? <a>Make it the default to open links when you click on them.</a>
<link> https://support.mozilla.org/kb/how-make-web-links-open-firefox-default

2) Firefox lets you tell websites not to track your browsing behavior. <a>Learn how to use our Do Not Track feature.</a>
<link> https://support.mozilla.org/kb/how-do-i-turn-do-not-track-feature

3) Use add-ons to personalize Firefox. Try a time-saving toolbar, a weather notifier or <a>choose from thousands more!</a>
<link> https://addons.mozilla.org/firefox/

4) There are lots of tricks that let you customize Firefox using toolbars and buttons. <a>Make your browser work the way you do.</a>
<Link> http://support.mozilla.com/kb/how-do-i-customize-toolbars
(Reporter)

Comment 6

4 years ago
Awesome, thanks!
Status: ASSIGNED → RESOLVED
Last Resolved: 4 years ago
Resolution: --- → FIXED
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