962293 - Write copy for Gigabit website

Status: RESOLVED FIXED

(Mozilla Foundation Communications :: Copy Editing and Review, task)

Description

[Erika Drushka]

Finalize draft copy on this Google Doc: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1resoGQSi9PTLpDPoVrY9AxQYFP-r6E1punXZKF8tUTg/edit?pli=1

Comment 1

[Erika Drushka]

Latest draft of the copy is Draft 3 at the top of this pad: https://mofocomms.etherpad.mozilla.org/gigabit

Will: I've edited it a bit further for clarity and brevity. Please make any final changes you feel are necessary and sign off in this ticket when you're done.

Sackin: Please review final copy.

Thanks, guys!

Comment 2

[Sabrina Ng [:sabrina]]

Attachment: Content Structure - Work in Progress draft

Comment 3

[Sabrina Ng [:sabrina]]

Attachment: Mockup - Work in Progress

Comment 4

[Sabrina Ng [:sabrina]]

The images attached are work in progress and will be revised as content finalizes.
I don't think I can put the menu links at the top (according to mozilla.org guidelines that I have to confirm) so I will revise it shortly to be separate menu (like in Ben's inital mockup).

Comment 5

[Sabrina Ng [:sabrina]]

Attachment: gigabit_mockup_applypage_v3.png

"Apply" Page mock-up

Comment 6

[Sabrina Ng [:sabrina]]

Attachment: gigabit_mockup_home_v1.png

"Home" Mock-Up

Comment 7

[Sabrina Ng [:sabrina]]

Attachment: gigabit_mockup_home_alt1.png

"Home" mock-up alternative banner

Comment 8

[Sabrina Ng [:sabrina]]

Attachment: gigabit_wordmark.png

gigabit wordmark

Comment 9

[Sabrina Ng [:sabrina]]

Attachment: gigabit_logowordmark.png

draft idea for a logo (I don't know how logos get approved and if we have time for the process to get to use one, but here is an idea anyway)

Comment 10

[Sabrina Ng [:sabrina]]

Attachment: screenshot_wordmark1.png

I agree with feedback given that using the wordmark lockup in metapro bold is oriented for other purposes.
After looking at: https://www.mozilla.org/en-US/styleguide/communications/typefaces/#wordmarks ... it describes using third tier (meta normal) font usage since I think GCF falls into a sub-brand?

We can stick to a wordmark with no logo for the website. (We can develop one in the future but seeking out the review process may take more time than we have to meet this deadline.)

Comment 11

[Sabrina Ng [:sabrina]]

Attachment: screenshot_wordmark2.png

The style guide itself (https://www.mozilla.org/en-US/styleguide/) has this "stacked" wordmark but it isn't 100% clear when this style is used but I applied it to GCF and it looks more compact as a wordmark and looks like it would be in the sub-brand category.

Comment 12

[Sabrina Ng [:sabrina]]

Attachment: gigabit_mockup_applypage_v4.png

Revised "Apply" page

Comment 13

[Sabrina Ng [:sabrina]]

Attachment: gigabit_wordmarkselection_v2.png

Final wordmark

Comment 14

[Sabrina Ng [:sabrina]]

Attachment: gigabit_mockup_applypage_v5.png

Updated wordmark on "Apply page"

Comment 15

[Sabrina Ng [:sabrina]]

Attachment: gigabit_mockup_home_v3.png

Updated wordmark and banner on "Home page"
Note: "Get involved > Contact Us" section subject to change when e-mail field is inserted during development

Comment 16

[Sabrina Ng [:sabrina]]

Attachment: gigabit_mockup_home_v4.png

Updated "Get Involved" section with iconography and email field