964444 - [Legal][Marketplace][hr] Review Developer Agreements to reflect Content Ratings requirements

Status: RESOLVED FIXED

(Mozilla Localizations :: hr / Croatian, defect)

Description

[Peiying Mo [:CocoMo]]

Hi Sasa,

I need you and the community to help with the review of this agreement.  

I worked with a localization agency qualified to localize legal related content.  I also shared all the info I can find from the l10n team page with them prior to the start of the project. As much as they tried, I do expect you to have lots of feedback from your review.  Please make a list of the general observations and examples to help them understand the issues and do a better job next time.

1). localized hr file: https://github.com/mozilla/marketplace-docs/blob/master/docs/developer_agreement/hr.md
2). en-US source: https://github.com/mozilla/marketplace-docs/blob/master/docs/developer_agreement/en-US.md

Also don't forget to check the URLs. If you know there is the localized version, do update those.  If not, we may have to provide those at a later time.

Please note: during the merge, the agency noticed the "date" was mangled.  Be sure to change it to match "October 30, 2013" as in en-US.

Let me know if any questions.  Thanks,
Peiying

Comment 1

[Sasa Tekovic]

Hi Peiying,

I'll take a look at the agreement. Since we are under pressure to meet the deadline for Firefox, Thunderbird and Firefox OS translation, can you give us a deadline for this task so that I can organize my time better?

Cheers!

Comment 2

[Peiying Mo [:CocoMo]]

Hi Sasa,

I don't have the specific date for cs launch activity to the market, it is said to be sometime in February.  Shall we aim at completing the review/update no later than Feb 14 or at the latest Feb 16?  I need dev to merge the changes before it can go live.   Thanks!

Comment 3

[Sasa Tekovic]

Hi Peiying,

I've reviewed and improved the development agreement document. I've sent a pull request [1] at Github in order to merge my changes to the main repository.

All the changes I've made can be found in this diff [2].

Cheers!

[1] https://github.com/mozilla/legal-docs/pull/9
[2] https://github.com/hseagle2015/legal-docs/commit/5dc95ee7b76c308c95472159fa920ccb99aeb829

Comment 4

[Peiying Mo [:CocoMo]]

Thank you Sasa for the review and the changes made.  Once it goes to production, take another look to make sure all is displayed correctly.  

Wil, could you please merge the change request?  I checked with Mika and she said it is ok to push it to production right away, no need to wait until the phone is officially launched in the market.

Comment 5

[Wil Clouser [:clouserw]]

Yup, done.  Should go out next Tuesday.

https://github.com/mozilla/legal-docs/commit/809df76a036fa8f37d454167733ab7fd6233c170

Comment 6

[Peiying Mo [:CocoMo]]

Thanks Wil.

Sasa, I forgot to ask, is there any general feedback you want to provide to the agency? I will share your pull request with them but if there is anything you can highlight to make them do a better job next time, let me know.  Thanks!

Comment 7

[Sasa Tekovic]

I have no special feedback. My changes are mostly minor so everything is pretty self-explainatory in the diff.