983404 - Provide Final Copy For Glow 2014

Status: VERIFIED FIXED

(Marketing :: Copy, task)

Description

[Ben (:bensternthal)]

This bug tracks delivery of final copy for the Glow 2014 Website.

This content will be translated and is needed prior to: 3/28/2014

Comment 1

[Ben (:bensternthal)]

Final copy is in and in the hands of l10n.

Comment 2

[Matej Novak [:matej]]

Hi Ben, here are a few small copy tweaks:

[OVERLAY PANEL]

Capitalize Web in "Share your Web on:"


[DID YOU KNOW PANEL]

Should we add a "»" after "Now see what kind of Web the world wants"?


[WHAT DOES THIS NUMBER MEAN PANEL]

This line needs an em dash rather than a hyphen: "That's why this number represents new downloads, automatic updates and any sharing that happens from this page — the worldwide impact of our global community."


[STATS PANEL]

Map should be lowercase in "Back to map"


Also, this isn't a copy thing, but should there be a way to unselect the options under "View by:" on the main map page? Right now if you click any of them, you can't go back to the initial state of the map.

Let me know if you have any questions.

Comment 3

[[github robot]]

Commits pushed to master at https://github.com/mozilla/mrburns

https://github.com/mozilla/mrburns/commit/ab98bb0df90468d6ef2b229ab5839cd535ffd6b2
Fix Bug 983404: Matej copy tweaks. Used css as much as possible to avoid additional string merge.

Fixed modal capitalization based on PR comment.

https://github.com/mozilla/mrburns/commit/c635eb3d8404aa28a6b09c27758ff1fe52e01922
Merge pull request #54 from bensternthal/983404-matej-copy-tweaks

Fix Bug 983404: Matej copy tweaks. Used css as much as possible to avoid...

Comment 4

[John Slater]

Hey Ben. I talked to Eric and he has confirmed that (contrary to earlier reports) we don't need to change any of the interstitial blurbs or other related copy.

So, unless Matej has any final comments in the vein of comment #2, I think we can close this one.

Comment 5

[Ben (:bensternthal)]

I concur! Please re-open as needed.