985080 - [australis] implement updated copy and image on fx download page

Status: VERIFIED FIXED

(www.mozilla.org :: Pages & Content, defect)

Description

[Jennifer Bertsch [:jbertsch]]

Hi-

For the Australis launch, we need to update the following for the /new download page:

1.  browser chrome image
2.  copy -> and we will test 2 versions

Thx,
Jen

PS to Pascal and Flod: We will have final copy and strings coded for localization by April 1

Comment 1

[Jennifer Bertsch [:jbertsch]]

Hi-

We hope to test copy the week of April 7 per bug https://bugzilla.mozilla.org/show_bug.cgi?id=986736

That test will determine the copy on the first screen of the /new page.

We also need updated images for the first and second scenes of /new (bugs 977465 and 977473).

Thx,
Jen

Comment 2

[Jennifer Bertsch [:jbertsch]]

Hi Flod and Pascal-

I will have the new copy for this page tomorrow, April 16.  Could you please add it to the lang file to the team can start working on it?

Thx,
Jen

Comment 3

[Francesco Lodolo [:flod]]

(In reply to Jennifer Bertsch [:jbertsch] from comment #2)
> Hi Flod and Pascal-
> 
> I will have the new copy for this page tomorrow, April 16.  Could you please
> add it to the lang file to the team can start working on it?

Sure.

Comment 4

[Chris More [:cmore]]

Here's a schedule for deliverables and next steps.

Scope of changes:

1) Change H1, add H2 text (coming today)
2) Change layout to centered (design coming today or tomorrow)
3) Australis screenshots coming next week.

The string change will have an impact on L10N and thus we may have to put in a conditional so that we don't break the most viewed page on mozilla.org.

Kohei said he can make the changes.

Comment 5

[Kohei Yoshino [:kohei]]

Happy to take this.

Comment 6

[Jennifer Bertsch [:jbertsch]]

Hoping to receive updated copy tomorrow, April 17.

Comment 7

[Jennifer Bertsch [:jbertsch]]

Hi Kohei-

This is the new text for the /new page:  Committed to you, your privacy and an open Web

Lee Tom will provide a screenshot for how to lay it out.

If you could update the text today so the localizers can see it, that would be great.

Thx,
Jen

Comment 8

[Kohei Yoshino [:kohei]]

The copy is used everywhere and :flod is adding it to the shared main.lang file, so we can update the text later with style tweaks.

Comment 9

[Lee Tom]

Attachment: FFx_Australis_New.jpg

Attaching jpg here for layout of updated messaging. Let me know if you have any questions. Thanks, L

Comment 10

[Kohei Yoshino [:kohei]]

Attachment: pull request

Thanks Lee, I sent a pull request, except the screenshots.

Comment 11

[[github robot]]

Commits pushed to master at https://github.com/mozilla/bedrock

https://github.com/mozilla/bedrock/commit/3fd17ae8cf2937d8e236e63a6961af92e0aff692
Bug 985080 - [australis] implement updated copy and image on fx download page

The copy and layout changes only.
The new screenshots will be provided in Bug 977465.

https://github.com/mozilla/bedrock/commit/6298b6c849c4f87dba7f7a46d68e6eaec4b5a801
Merge pull request #1897 from kyoshino/bug-985080-fx-new-copy

Bug 985080 - [australis] implement updated copy and image on fx download page

Comment 12

[raymond [:retornam] (inactive)]

verified fixed http://www.mozilla.org/en-US/firefox/new/