Closed Bug 985478 Opened 10 years ago Closed 10 years ago

[FxA][l10n][copy] Copy Review for Firefox Accounts strings

Categories

(Firefox OS Graveyard :: FxA, defect)

Product:
Firefox OS Graveyard
Component:
FxA
Type:
defect
Priority:
Not set
Severity:
normal

Tracking

(Not tracked)

Status:
RESOLVED DUPLICATE of bug 960130

People

(Reporter: Pike, Unassigned)

Details

I came across a few strings for First Run of Firefox Accounts, which I think need copy review.

fxa-intro.innerHTML = Firefox lets you use a single account to log in to services like <strong>Marketplace</strong> and <strong>Where's My Fox</strong>.

"Firefox" seems to be the wrong brand for FxOS?

fxa-create-account-or-sign-in = Create Account or Sign In

This button caption feels odd to me, cross check? https://developer.mozilla.org/en-US/Apps/Design/Content#Buttons says it should be at least shorter, probably breaking that on purpose? "or" or "Or"? "In" or "in"?

fxa-logged = Now your email {{email}} have settled your account with Firefox Accounts! You can set your preferences through Settings App.

The first part needs better wording. Not sure about "Settings" or "Settings App".
Status: NEW → RESOLVED
Closed: 10 years ago
Resolution: --- → DUPLICATE
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