>>Project/Request Title: July 2014 Firefox & You Copy >>Project Overview: Outline is almost complete - MJ will confirm when ready: https://docs.google.com/a/mozilla.com/document/d/19ns36w7D7AL20Dd7V0B_OUbDc83uK5nG_FR5FJsDi_A/edit Timeline: Copy draft: June 19 Copy due: June 25 Copy sent to l10n: June 26 l10n due: July 11/14 Launch - July 17 (EN test on July 15) >> Creative Help Needed: Copy: Yes Design: No Video: No Other: No >>Creative Specs: The usual - it's in the outline. >>CTA and Design: Outline is almost complete - MJ will confirm when ready: https://docs.google.com/a/mozilla.com/document/d/19ns36w7D7AL20Dd7V0B_OUbDc83uK5nG_FR5FJsDi_A/edit >>Creative Due Date: 2014-06-25 >>Launch Date: 2014-06-26 >>Mozilla Goal: All >>Points of Contact: firstname.lastname@example.org, email@example.com
I'm still working on a couple of loose threads in the copy plan. I should have it done by EOD today. New date: Copy draft: 6/23
July content outline is ready for copy magic. https://docs.google.com/a/mozilla.com/document/d/19ns36w7D7AL20Dd7V0B_OUbDc83uK5nG_FR5FJsDi_A
Hey Troy, how are you? How goes the newsletter?
Hi Jess Things (and the newsletter) are going well. But I took last Friday off to move, so I'll probably need an extra day with everything — okay to have it ready for the 26th? Thanks, Troy
Hey Troy, We can work with 6/26 to get the copy. I'll plan to have feedback to you on 6/27, midday. Does 6/30 noon PST work for revised content back to us? M.J.
That sounds perfect. Thanks, M.J.
I also want to mention that Tuesday is a holiday in Canada. I'm reviewing Troy's draft now and we'll have it ready for you later today, but just wanted to note that. Thanks.
Hey everyone Here is the link to my draft. I'm still going to be adding some headlines throughout it, but I think it's good shape otherwise to start bringing in feedback. Let me know if there are any questions. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1pNi-V2Y-rYv4JrXOfntVgTrPEFJegt3a1uDkWG6xd2U/edit?usp=sharing Thanks, Troy
Thanks for the holiday heads up. I'll get going.
Hey Troy, I've reviewed the content and added comments throughout. Let me know if you have any questions about any of it. Thanks, M.J.
Thanks, M.J. I'll take a look. If there's anything extensive, I probably won't get revisions back to you until Wednesday, with tomorrow being a holiday here.
Hey Troy and Matej, We tweaked the 1-year anniversary content as had been requested. We had a different vision for the Android feature story so it would work better in layout. Let us know your thoughts. New add-on in place (KeeFox) to replace GreaseMonkey, which ran last month. Thanks for giving it another go-over. M.J. M.J.
The newsletter is looking great. Troy, do you have any more edits or comments? Or are we all set for l10n?
I just updated a few things and closed out some open comments — think I'm good to go. Thanks, Troy
Hey Troy and Matej, We made two changes to the copy: 1. Reverted the first sentence of the Intro Copy. 2. Changed the Android feature #3 headline to match the flow of all the feature headlines. If these are OK, we're ready for l10n. M.J.
I think we're really close. Just left a couple of comments. Troy, can you have a look as well? Thanks.
Thanks, Matej. I made some minor revisions and addressed your comments. Things are looking good to me.
Looks good. Closing this out. Thanks!
Status: ASSIGNED → RESOLVED
Last Resolved: 4 years ago
Resolution: --- → FIXED
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