1038753 - Review copy for event reminder emails

Status: RESOLVED FIXED

(Webmaker Graveyard :: Events, defect)

Description

[Jon Buckley [:jbuck]]

Current copy can be seen as rendered here: https://www.dropbox.com/s/jlqdlzgknwrav5s/Screenshot%202014-07-15%2012.01.45.png

Subject: Event reminder {{ eventDate }}
Body:
Hi {{ username }},

This is a reminder that you have an upcoming event.

{{ eventDate }}
{{ eventTitle with eventURL as link }}
{{ eventAddress }}

{{ eventDescription }}

Hosted by:

{{ organizerUsername }}
{{ optional organizerEmail }}

Enjoy your event!

Amira
Webmaker Community Manager

Comment 1

[Matt Thompson (@OpenMatt :OpenMatt)]

This email copy could probably be warmer. Erika D or Amira: thoughts?

Comment 2

[Amira]

Tweeked copy every so slightly but added some Amiraism to it: https://etherpad.mozilla.org/ReplyEmailEvents

Comment 3

[Matt Thompson (@OpenMatt :OpenMatt)]

* Sweet. Jbuck, can you update the copy in mailman?

Comment 4

[Matt Thompson (@OpenMatt :OpenMatt)]

* whoops -- mailman = mailroom.

Comment 5

[Matt Thompson (@OpenMatt :OpenMatt)]

[sep5] was a long time ago! :) 

What's the status? Please update with [oct17] or other train.

Comment 6

[Jon Buckley [:jbuck]]

Attachment: https://github.com/mozilla/webmaker-mailroom/pull/18

Comment 7

[Jon Buckley [:jbuck]]

Comment on attachment 8505007 [details] [review]
https://github.com/mozilla/webmaker-mailroom/pull/18

r+ from kate in github

Comment 8

[[github robot]]

Commit pushed to master at https://github.com/mozilla/webmaker-mailroom

https://github.com/mozilla/webmaker-mailroom/commit/a6c55ec3e0eb632b8f1c30728f126f997fb0b93a
Bug 1038753 - Update event reminder copy

Comment 9

[[github robot]]

Commit pushed to master at https://github.com/mozilla/sawmill

https://github.com/mozilla/sawmill/commit/c768b24e350242e8288729200fc8cd78949e03d2
Bug 1038753 - Update to webmaker-mailroom v0.1.3

Comment 10

[Jon Buckley [:jbuck]]

All done!