1083261 - Final copy / UX review for new login

Status: RESOLVED FIXED

(Webmaker Graveyard :: webmaker.org, defect)

Description

[Cassie McDaniel [:cassiemc]]

Once Ricardo has done final UI updates, we need to do a final copy review before we can employ Ali's help for UI translations, and before shipping.

Comment 1

[Matthew Willse [:mattheww]]

Attachment: Join CTA copy https://webmaker.etherpad.mozilla.org/login-join-cta

Here is text for CTAs as currently implemented.

Comment 2

[Matthew Willse [:mattheww]]

I have reviewed the copy as implemented. I'm adding a link to our sumo help page on a few error messages. I don't see any other critical issues. The translation ship sailed earlier today.

Post launch, we will alert Erika and others with an eagle eye. It's not in an easy format to share without context. https://github.com/mozilla/webmaker-login-ux/blob/master/locale/en_US/webmaker-login.json#L119

Comment 3

[Ricardo Vazquez [:ricardo]]

Should we keep this ticket open Matthew?

Comment 4

[Matthew Willse [:mattheww]]

I flagged Cassie and Paul to review the CTA copy. Text is in good shape and I don't think this is a blocker, but I hesitate to close it before the sun sets.

Comment 5

[Cassie McDaniel [:cassiemc]]

Comment on attachment 8507043 [details]
Join CTA copy https://webmaker.etherpad.mozilla.org/login-join-cta

Looks good, and as you say, we can tweak more down the road.

Wondered if "Goggles" should be capitalized. And perhaps "Explore" instead of "Visit" resources? A stronger verb.

We can do these tweaks later though (and with more data). R+

Comment 6

[Matthew Willse [:mattheww]]

Great. Marking as fixed. Ready to roll.

Comment 7

[paulj]

I can't access this etherpad. But don't let me hold anything up and continue rolling as needed.