Closed Bug 1136536 Opened 9 years ago Closed 9 years ago

Updates to the Sync page for iOS and Reading List - Copy & Design

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RESOLVED FIXED
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People

(Reporter: ckprice, Assigned: ltom)

References

Details

(Whiteboard: engagement-fxGrowth-2015)

>>Project/Request Title:
Update Sync page with a Reading List highlight - Design

>>Project Overview:
Update the Sync page with a highlight for Reading List

Wiki: https://wiki.mozilla.org/Firefox_Growth_Campaign_2015

>> Creative Help Needed:
Copy:    No 
Design:  Yes 
Video:   No 
Other:  No

>>Creative Specs:
Full specs TBD

>>CTA and Design:
Full specs TBD

>>Creative Due Date:
2015-03-18

>>Launch Date:
2015-05-12

>>Mozilla Goal:
Org Support

>>Mozilla Creative Collective:
No

>>Points of Contact:
Not provided
Hey Cory,

Could you clarify what a "highlight for Reading List" would be? Is it a new section? Replacing something existing? More of a promo?

Thanks.
Hi Matej,

I'll get this answered for you.
Whiteboard: engagement-fxGrowth-2015
Updating this bug to make it a general Copy/Design bug supporting Reading List AND iOS updates to the Sync page.
Blocks: 1131702
Summary: Update Sync page with a Reading List highlight - Design → Updates to the Sync page for iOS and Reading List - Copy & Design
Blocks: 1139196
No longer blocks: 1131702, 1136534
Assignee: jbalaco → ltom
Status: NEW → ASSIGNED
:leetom - are you okay to dig into design? We've set up a meeting with Troy for tomorrow on copy.

UX approved here bug1139199comment1

Thanks
Flags: needinfo?(ltom)
Thanks for posting the wireframes. Yup - I've already started on design and will look out for the copy doc tomorrow.
Flags: needinfo?(ltom)
(In reply to Lee Tom from comment #5)
> Thanks for posting the wireframes. Yup - I've already started on design and
> will look out for the copy doc tomorrow.

Just to clarify, Troy will only be getting caught up on this project today (PM ET), so we won't have copy ready until next week.
Wires here: https://spring15.etherpad.mozilla.org/sync-page

Instructions for how to Sync on mobile sent to Troy by email.
Hey everyone

Here's the link to my work-in-progress copy deck for the Sync update. Let me know if there are any questions.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1rav8lZTbtUzOKfEDAFcFXwzitaQ3D42CwUOZlBv2Vf8/edit?usp=sharing

Thanks,
Troy
Just a note

Designs approved 3/31

1. Desktop non Fx
http://cl.ly/image/3w0X2R3a0O1j

2. Mobile non Fx
http://cl.ly/image/1033350g2V0c

3. Mobile with instructions (iOS not signed in)
http://cl.ly/image/090g1y061H1t


Copy approved (comment 8) April 2nd

:leetom, will you please add designs files to this bug?
Flags: needinfo?(ltom)
Here are the PSDs: http://cl.ly/1J1r3t0G2R3f

Note: there are 2 conditions within the 320px mobile version of the PSDs, denoted in Layer palette. Let me know if you have any questions. Thanks!
 
> :leetom, will you please add designs files to this bug?
Flags: needinfo?(ltom)
Given the uncertain timing of Reading List I'm worried about the phrase "Check out your saved articles on the go?". I can build the page in such a way that this can be a separate string that we can easily toggle off or on, but without it the whole thing doesn't read well. I think we need an alternative second question to round out that blurb if Reading List isn't available. Maybe something like "Reach your favorite bookmarks on the go?" or something about passwords?
Flags: needinfo?(troy)
Hey Craig

That will definitely be changing. There's a meeting set up for later today to go over the various points of copy and content that will need to be revised. Stay tuned.

(In reply to Craig Cook (:craigcook) from comment #11)
> Given the uncertain timing of Reading List I'm worried about the phrase
> "Check out your saved articles on the go?". I can build the page in such a
> way that this can be a separate string that we can easily toggle off or on,
> but without it the whole thing doesn't read well. I think we need an
> alternative second question to round out that blurb if Reading List isn't
> available. Maybe something like "Reach your favorite bookmarks on the go?"
> or something about passwords?
Flags: needinfo?(troy)
Status: ASSIGNED → RESOLVED
Closed: 9 years ago
Resolution: --- → FIXED
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