1208364 - [UX][TV] We need copy review for new TV features in 2.5

Status: RESOLVED FIXED

(Firefox OS Graveyard :: Gaia::TV, defect, P2)

Description

[Josh Cheng [:josh]]

We need copy review for all TV features:

Previous apps:
* app-deck
* browser
* dashboard
* device-deck
* dlna-player
* fling-player
* fling-sender
* notification
* notification-receiver
* notification-sender
* smart-home
* smart-settings
* smart-system
* tv-deck
* tv-epg
* weather-widget

New from 2.5:
* Presentation API (Cast to TV, Send URL, ...)
* FxAccount (Bookmark/History sync)
* Remote control
* FTU
* Pocket

Comment 1

[Tori Chen [:tori]]

Hi Matej,

We are looking for someone to help us on copy review for FFOS v2.5 features, and Francesco from l10n team direct us to you. I am wondering if you or somebody in your team can help us on this? Currently we have 4 specs needed to be reviewed as below.

2.5 TV Features (New)

1. Seamless_experience (TV side) V0.2
https://drive.google.com/a/mozilla.com/file/d/0B4dMhI4hp32OM2xHaG1RZDVWNWs/view

2. FxAccount V0.3
https://drive.google.com/a/mozilla.com/file/d/0B4dMhI4hp32ONkFfTWdVdGVwN1U/view

3. Remote control V0.4
https://drive.google.com/a/mozilla.com/file/d/0B4dMhI4hp32OanBaWVpVMmQxMEk/view

4. Pocket V0.3
https://drive.google.com/a/mozilla.com/file/d/0B4dMhI4hp32OZ2FZRlpuQWwtM1k/view

Please kindly let me know if copy review for specs covered by your team and your schedule arrangement. Thanks.

Comment 2

[Matej Novak [:matej]]

Hi Tori,

I've added Jenn Balaco here, who will be better able to answer scheduling and resourcing questions, but yes, we should be able to help with this.

Jenn, is this bug OK as is, or would you like it to go through the engagement request alias.

I've also added Troy as an FYI, since he may end up helping with this.

Thanks.

Comment 3

[Josh Cheng [:josh]]

Hi Jennifer, Hi Matej,
Appreciate your help!
Do you have any update for the copy review scheduling and resourcing? We would really hope we can complete this before Nov 2 which is the date partner can starting their l10n work. Thanks!

Comment 4

[Josh Cheng [:josh]]

(In reply to Matej Novak [:matej] from comment #2)
> Hi Tori,
> 
> I've added Jenn Balaco here, who will be better able to answer scheduling
> and resourcing questions, but yes, we should be able to help with this.
> 
> Jenn, is this bug OK as is, or would you like it to go through the
> engagement request alias.
> 
> I've also added Troy as an FYI, since he may end up helping with this.
> 
> Thanks.

Hi Matej, hi Jennifer, 
Really appreciate your help. However partner want to have them ready and copy reviewed before end of October. We may need to ask help from our Marketing team Natasha for outsourced copy reviewer for new features. 

However we still need copy review for Previous apps thus I will open a new bug for that.
Thank you very much!

Comment 5

[Jennifer Balaco]

Hi Josh, 

We might still be able to help. I will have an update tomorrow. 

Thanks!

Comment 6

[Jennifer Balaco]

Hi Josh, 

Troy is going to work on this and will have feedback for you next week. He will be reviewing primarily for grammar/style, since he is not familiar with the product.

Comment 7

[Troy Palmer]

(In reply to Tori Chen [:tori] from comment #1)
> Hi Matej,
> 
> We are looking for someone to help us on copy review for FFOS v2.5 features,
> and Francesco from l10n team direct us to you. I am wondering if you or
> somebody in your team can help us on this? Currently we have 4 specs needed
> to be reviewed as below.
> 
> 2.5 TV Features (New)
> 
> 1. Seamless_experience (TV side) V0.2
> https://drive.google.com/a/mozilla.com/file/d/0B4dMhI4hp32OM2xHaG1RZDVWNWs/
> view
> 
> 2. FxAccount V0.3
> https://drive.google.com/a/mozilla.com/file/d/0B4dMhI4hp32ONkFfTWdVdGVwN1U/
> view
> 
> 3. Remote control V0.4
> https://drive.google.com/a/mozilla.com/file/d/0B4dMhI4hp32OanBaWVpVMmQxMEk/
> view
> 
> 4. Pocket V0.3
> https://drive.google.com/a/mozilla.com/file/d/0B4dMhI4hp32OZ2FZRlpuQWwtM1k/
> view
> 
> Please kindly let me know if copy review for specs covered by your team and
> your schedule arrangement. Thanks.

Hi Tori

Can I get commenting access to the docs? I'm looking to add my review notes later today.

Thanks,
Troy

Comment 8

[Tori Chen [:tori]]

Sure! Just opened the access.

Comment 9

[Troy Palmer]

(In reply to Tori Chen [:tori] from comment #8)
> Sure! Just opened the access.

Perfect. Thanks, Tori!

Comment 10

[Troy Palmer]

Attachment: [TV] remote_control_v0.3_OCT30.pdf

Remote Control deck with my notes / comments.

Comment 11

[Troy Palmer]

Attachment: [TV]FirefoxAccount_v0.4_OCT30.pdf

Fx Accounts deck with my notes / comments.

Comment 12

[Troy Palmer]

Attachment: [TV]Seamless_Experience(TV side for l10n)_v0.2_OCT30.pdf

Seamless Experience deck with my notes / comments.

Comment 13

[Troy Palmer]

I've attached the PDFs with annotations -- let me know if there are any problems viewing them. Wasn't sure how much I should comment on the descriptions, but I provided some feedback where I could.

No changes / comments for the Pocket deck.

Comment 14

[Josh Cheng [:josh]]

Thanks Troy,
The task is completed :https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1Xb_R00AoFXR9UY3CGln9yygm0GyFqy0zaHEWbjSfKpw/edit#gid=0