1445078 - [fr] Mobile Apps email QA

Status: RESOLVED FIXED

(Mozilla Localizations :: fr / French, enhancement)

Description

[Théo Chevalier]

Hey Jessica,

Thanks for the send preview! I just made minor changes, and I would say we’re good to go. Adrien, if you see something else, please shoot!


Changes:

- Removed semicolons after titles to match Pocket’s title, it looked weird otherwise.

Here: https://pontoon.mozilla.org/fr/engagement/emails/2018/jan_mobile_app_updates_fr.lang/?string=175265
And there: https://pontoon.mozilla.org/fr/engagement/emails/2018/jan_mobile_app_updates_fr.lang/?string=175270



- All download links are now using imperative (the first one was using infinitive, so it wasn’t coherent)
Here: https://pontoon.mozilla.org/fr/engagement/emails/2018/jan_mobile_app_updates_fr.lang/?string=175276


Full diff of changes, if you prefer:
https://github.com/mozilla-l10n/engagement-l10n/commit/06ba530ba6e7cbc07297bfa1eb6f0382bdce43ca


Also, you may want to try and remove the empty callout box next to the main title, it looks a bit weird to have the last word on a new line so early. But if it’s too complicated or used for something else, don’t worry about that!


Thanks!

Comment 1

[Jessica Osorio [:josorio]]

Hey Théo, 

Thank you for providing all that feedback. All the changes to the copy have been made and we fixed the space issue in the headline (screenshot attached to this bug). 

We also sent out a new proof. 

Please confirm if everything is good to go.

Thank you,

Jess

Comment 2

[Jessica Osorio [:josorio]]

Attachment: Screen Shot 2018-03-26 at 11.11.36 AM.png

Comment 3

[Théo Chevalier]

Thanks Jess!

Looks very good to me :)