Closed Bug 538413 Opened 15 years ago Closed 14 years ago

Finalize content

Categories

(Websites :: browserchoice.mozilla.com, defect)

Product:
Websites
Component:
browserchoice.mozilla.com
Type:
defect
Priority:
Not set
Severity:
normal

Tracking

(Not tracked)

Status:
VERIFIED FIXED

People

(Reporter: abuchanan, Assigned: pfinch)

References

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URL
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Details

Hey,

We're missing some content, the Privacy blurb, links, etc.  Also, Patrick once everything is filled in, and your happy with the content, could you officially sign off here, saying the content is final?  

http://browserchoice.stage.mozilla.com/

Thanks.
Patrick, any progress on final content?
Privacy text:

Privacy

A lot comes down to trust, and we make every effort to earn—and keep—yours. The latest Firefox tools protect your data and we give you options to manage your own privacy. Learn more.  



Read more links for English are...

Security:
http://www.mozilla-europe.org/en/firefox/security/

Customisation
http://www.mozilla-europe.org/en/firefox/customize/

Privacy
http://www.mozilla-europe.org/en/firefox/features/#security
updated, r59685

still missing the Global Acclaim link
Aologies, link for Global Acclaim is

http://www.mozilla.com/en-US/press/awards.html
updated, r59723
Is the english content final?  If so, we can close this bug.
Hi,

Please update these texts, per legal review:

"With superior security" to change to "With excellent security"

"A lot comes down to trust, and we make every effort to earn"
to change to
"A lot comes down to trust, and we've made great efforts to earn"

There will be another update with prefered content from reviews for the speech bubbles, I will see if I can get that tomorrow or Friday.

Patrick
(In reply to comment #7)
> Hi,
> 
> Please update these texts, per legal review:
> 
> "With superior security" to change to "With excellent security"
> 
> "A lot comes down to trust, and we make every effort to earn"
> to change to
> "A lot comes down to trust, and we've made great efforts to earn"
> 

done, r61303
Hi,

one more comment from legal that the text on the "Private Browsing" box needs to be updated... just checking with Jslater on final copy as he has to make same changes to Mozilla.com.  Will advise.
Hi,


Turn this feature on and don't leave a single browsing fingerprint behind.
per the above, please could you replace the text in the Private Browsing box ("Turn this feature on and don't leave a single browsing fingerprint behind.") with

"Sometimes it’s nice to go undercover, so turn this feature on and protect your browsing history."

I do not expect any more changes from legal. 

thanks

Patrick
done, r61604
Patrick, Stas just noticed that the Global Acclaim blurb at the top is actually the Security blurb.  Could you post the correct Global Acclaim blurb here?


Thanks
The Global Acclaim blurb is

"Don't just take our word for it —it's estimated that a quarter of Internet users have switched to Firefox. And 100 million new users made it the most downloaded browser last year. Learn more."
Hi,

Updated texts for Bubble One and Bubble Two:


"Make the right browser update: Firefox 3.6.  ...the best version of Firefox in years."
Computerworld, January 2010


"the gold standard of alternatives...Firefox 3.6 is full-featured, lightning fast, and secure. "

CNET editors' review, January 2010 

Sources are here:
http://blogs.computerworld.com/15439/make_the_right_browser_update_firefox_3_6
http://download.cnet.com/mozilla-firefox/

but not required for the site.

Patrick
r62354 checked in the new bubble text for en-GB

BUT, it's not showing up on stage, after over an hour.  Stas, any idea what's going on?
They do show up, but only when locale is set to en-GB: http://browserchoice.stage.mozilla.com/?locale=en_GB.utf8

The default is en-US, which I'm guessing we don't really need. Changing line 19 here http://viewvc.svn.mozilla.org/vc/projects/browserchoice/trunk/libs/l10n.php?revision=62222&view=markup#l19 to 

$locale = $_GET['locale'] ? $_GET['locale'] : 'en_GB.utf8'; 

should solve this for now.

For later, we need to make a decision whether or not we want to have en-US at all. I think en-GB as the default fallback should be enough?
Pascal mentioned that the Read More link in the Customize section could link to getpersonas.com or addons.m.o instead of mozilla-europe

This is because,

"there are more locales supported by browserchoice than we have on mozilla-europe, plus the customize page is about addons in general not personas"

I'm paraphrasing an IRC conversation there, and Pascal can give a clearer description.  It's an open issue that needs to be resolved asap.

Thanks.
Hi,

did you share the requirements doc?  I indicated what I thought would be appropriate links per locale, I will share with Stas tomorrow in case this hasn't been discussed yet.  I assumed that where we don't have a localied link, we go to en-US.  Not sure if AMO or Getpersonas.com is a better choice...they will not be localised either, will they?

Patrick

What I had envisaged:

Bulgarian  bg
http://www.mozilla-europe.org/bg/firefox/customize/ 

Croatian hr
None http://www.mozilla.com/en-US/firefox/customize/ 

Czech cs
http://www.mozilla-europe.org/cs/firefox/customize/ 

Danish da
http://www.mozilla-europe.org/da/firefox/customize/ 

Dutch nl
http://www.mozilla-europe.org/nl/firefox/customize/ 

English en-GB
http://www.mozilla-europe.org/en/firefox/customize/ 

Estonian et
None http://www.mozilla.com/en-US/firefox/customize/ 

Finnish fi
http://www.mozilla-europe.org/fi/firefox/customize/ 

French fr
http://www.mozilla-europe.org/fr/firefox/customize/ 

German de
http://www.mozilla-europe.org/de/firefox/customize/ 

Greek el
http://www.mozilla-europe.org/el/firefox/customize/ 

Hungarian hu
http://www.mozilla-europe.org/hu/firefox/customize/ 

Italian it
http://www.mozilla-europe.org/it/firefox/customize/ 

Latvian lv
None http://www.mozilla.com/en-US/firefox/customize/ 

Lithuanian lt
http://www.mozilla-europe.org/lt/firefox/customize/ 

Norwegian no
http://www.mozilla-europe.org/no/firefox/customize/ 

Polish pl
http://www.mozilla-europe.org/pl/firefox/customize/ 

Portuguese pt-PT
http://www.mozilla-europe.org/pt/firefox/customize/ 

Romanian ro
http://www.mozilla-europe.org/ro/firefox/customize/ 

Slovak sk
http://www.mozilla-europe.org/sk/firefox/customize/ 

Slovene sl
None http://www.mozilla.com/en-US/firefox/customize/ 

Swedish se
None http://www.mozilla.com/en-US/firefox/customize/ 

Spanish es-ES
http://www.mozilla-europe.org/es/firefox/customize/
We have getpersonas in several european languages now (el, cs, pl, es-ES and more to come). We also have addons.mozilla.org localized in many of the European languages we target and AMO has a nice personas section.

Ex:
http://www.getpersonas.com/el/
https://addons.mozilla.org/de/firefox/personas/

So IMO when we have those localized, we should use them and only use the customize page on mozilla-europe when we have no addons site localized.
Quote bubbles for en-GB working on stage now.  But, the background image is broken :\  I've filed bug 546512 for this, should be a quick and simple fix.  Neil is on it.

Stas, on a side note, I added code to always bind gettext locales using the UTF-8 charset, so appending .utf-8 shouldn't be necessary anymore.
Depends on: 546512
Ok, we shouldn't have any more English content changes at this point, and Stas has the the per-locale links working.

http://browserchoice.stage.mozilla.com/?clear_cache
Status: NEW → RESOLVED
Closed: 14 years ago
Resolution: --- → FIXED
Verified FIXED.
Status: RESOLVED → VERIFIED
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