566667 - Firefox Home install workflow/first run copy edits

Status: RESOLVED FIXED

(Cloud Services Graveyard :: Firefox Home, defect)

Description

[Caitlin Looney]

Dan,

The attached PDF has all my copy edits and recommendation for prompt to go back to login field once a user has sent himself/herself email instructions. Let me know if you have any questions. I've copied the the copy changes below as well.

FIRST SCREEN

Header: Firefox Home
Subhead: Take your favorite parts of the Web with you

To get started with Firefox Home, you will need to create a Firefox Sync account on your computer.

Button <Get a Firefox Sync Account> --> SECOND SCREEN 
Button < I already have a Firefox Sync Account> --> Existing Login Dialog


SECOND SCREEN
Header: Firefox Home
Subhead: Take your favorite parts of the Web with you

Enter your email address and we'll send you Firefox Home setup instructions. Your information will be kept private.

<Email field>
Button <Set me up!> --> Prompt after tapping "Set me up" --> Go back to login page/dialogue because that will be what user must fill out once they're up and running on their desktop. Can it be slightly customized for this new user group? 
Ex:
Thanks! Check your email for Firefox Home setup instructions. Come back and fill in your new login info to begin. See you soon!

Comment 1

[Caitlin Looney]

Attachment: install workflow/first run

Comment 2

[Ragavan S [:rags]]

A few quick comments:

(In reply to comment #0)

> 
> To get started with Firefox Home, you will need to create a Firefox Sync
> account on your computer.
> 
> Button <Get a Firefox Sync Account> --> SECOND SCREEN 
> Button < I already have a Firefox Sync Account> --> Existing Login Dialog

How about something like:

To get started with Firefox Home, you will need to set up Firefox Sync on your computer.

Button <Set up Firefox Sync now> --> SECOND SCREEN
Button <I am already using Firefox Sync> --> Existing Login Dialog


> 
> SECOND SCREEN
> Header: Firefox Home
> Subhead: Take your favorite parts of the Web with you
> 
> Enter your email address and we'll send you Firefox Home setup instructions.
> Your information will be kept private.
> 
> <Email field>
> Button <Set me up!> --> Prompt after tapping "Set me up" --> Go back to login
> page/dialogue because that will be what user must fill out once they're up and
> running on their desktop. Can it be slightly customized for this new user
> group? 
> Ex:
> Thanks! Check your email for Firefox Home setup instructions. Come back and
> fill in your new login info to begin. See you soon!

Comment 3

[Caitlin Looney]

wfm - thanks Ragavan.

Comment 4

[Dan Walkowski]

Needs copy review of beta 12

Comment 5

[Tony Chung [:tchung]]

Moving FFHome-related bugs to new component -> Firefox Home