601001 - Copy Review - Oct Mainstream Newsletter

Status: NEW

(Marketing :: General, task, P1)

Description

[Eve Murto]

John, Appreciate your review of our October newsletter copy thus far. Thanks already for the Editors note and Main Story (Firefox 4 Beta) that you sent us (included here so you can see everything). 

Banner says:  mozilla & you
 
[EDITORS NOTE]

Be a Part of Something Great   

Firefox users like you have a special opportunity to test-drive our new browser. Take a moment today to download the Firefox 4 beta and check out all the latest features. Our developers around the world would like to hear what you think, so be sure to use the Feedback button, which allows you to send us your comments and suggestions instantly. Thank you again for helping us make Firefox the best in the world!  

Jane
Editor


[MAIN STORY]: 
Test-Drive the New Firefox 4 Beta  

The world’s best browser is about to get even better--with your help! Download Firefox 4 beta today, and preview all the new features that will make your browsing quicker, easier and more intuitive. Check out the tab-organizer Panorama, which eliminates tab clutter. Try Firefox Sync, which synchronizes your settings, passwords, open tabs and more across all your devices. And don’t forget the new Feedback button, which sends us your comments instantly. Get Firefox 4 Beta. 

http://www.mozilla.com/firefox/beta/


FIREFOX TALES   (50 words) 

Meet Steve Boswell

Steve is a grandfather of five who recently had a medical condition that made it difficult for him to read.  He missed being able to get online to read news and use email.  After his son helped him install the Fire Vox add-on, he was able to hear “hear” the news each day, and could stay better connected.  Learn about Fire Vox. [http://www.accessfirefox.org/Fire_Vox.php]

<<HEADSHOT OF STEVE BOSWELL>>

FIREFOX HEALTH CHECK   

Keep Your Firefox Happy

Be sure you have the latest, greatest Firefox and most secure version. 

(BUTTON – Firefox 3.6) 
Version 3.6.10 (English) – (update to latest version)  

(What do you recommend here since we are promoting the Beta above)? 



Are Your Plugins up to date? 

Old Plugins can interrupt browsing, waste time, and increase risk of attack from malware and viruses.   Follow these easy steps to stay up to date. 


FOOTER : 

Find out more about Mozilla
(various links) 



RIGHT SIDEBAR : 

Rock Your Firefox

Family Organizer
Create a safe and fun online experience while planning everything the family does offline with add-ons that keep the family cooking.
https://addons.mozilla.org/en-US/firefox/collections/mozilla/family/


Today’s Tip   

Researching a topic? Go to the Bookmarks menu and select Bookmark All Tabs. Then just name the bookmarks folder that you create after your topic. Instant organization!
http://support.mozilla.com/kb/Bookmark+folders



Help Translate and Subtitle web videos (or)     (20 word blurb) 
Help Subtitle Web Videos (or) 
A Global Wikipedia for Subtitles

Be a part of Universal Subtitles, a software project and online community focused on building the world’s simplest subtitling tool. 

http://www.drumbeat.org/universal-subtitles

Need Help? 

Did you know we have a volunteer community who wants to help you? 
Search our support pages for answers and advice about using Firefox. 



FINE PRINT: 

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Comment 1

[Eve Murto]

Updated content: 

Replace header with "Keep Your Firefox Happy" with "Healthy Computing" (or something similar you suggest) 

Updated copy: 

Keep Your Firefox Secure

Check out this quick video which overview Firefox’s key security features. 

(graphic of either video start box or the "blue key" ) 

traffic leads to video page: http://www.mozilla.com/en-US/firefox/video/?video=security

Thank you! -Eve

Comment 2

[John Slater]

Attachment: October newsletter text - first revised draft

Hi all. I've attached a revised draft of the newsletter text. I generally tried to shorten it where possible, but I might have missed some nuances about what content you want in there along the way.

If you have any questions, just ask!

Comment 3

[Eve Murto]

John, Jane, Please review this revised copy for the Editors Note and the Main Story for the October Newsletter as our backup plan as the Beta is not ready: 

[EDITORS NOTE: ABOUT 60 WORDS]:

Staying Organized is a Breeze

Managing your day to day life can get complicated, with work, meals, hobbies, social activities, and all the details managing everyday family life. This month we spotlight the ‘Family Organizer collection of add-ons to help you stay organized, get meals on the table,  and keep the family safe online.  Check out some of the other add-ons collections for other great ideas.  

https://addons.mozilla.org/en-US/firefox/collections/
https://addons.mozilla.org/en-US/firefox/collections/mozilla/family/ 

Jane
Editor


[MAIN STORY - ABOUT 60 WORDS]

Keep the Family Cooking with Family Organizer {or}
Family Organizer To the Rescue 

The “Family Organizer” collection help you manage your busy life and stay safe online. This popular collection of 7 add-ons does everything from helps you with your reminders and ToDo lists, lets you better organize your grocery shopping list, blocks appropriate content, and features an online playground for kids 3-12. Manage your photos and create albums to keep the memories fresh.  Learn more about the Family Organizer collection. 
Link: https://addons.mozilla.org/en-US/firefox/collections/mozilla/family/

Thank you for your quick review! -Eve

Comment 4

[John Slater]

Edits also sent via email, but here they are again:

Editor's Note:

Managing your day-to-day life can get complicated, with work, family, activities and all the other things that keep us busy. The good news is that Firefox can help! This month we're spotlighting the Family Organizer collection of add-ons to help you keep it all together. Be sure to check out our other add-ons collections for more great ideas.

Jane, Editor


Lead Story:

Family Organizer to the Rescue!
The Family Organizer collection uses the power of FIrefox add-ons to help you manage your busy life. The seven add-ons in this group do everything from providing with daily "to do" reminders to making grocery lists to keeping your kids safe online. There's even an online playground for kids aged 3-12 and ways to organize your personal photos. Learn more about the Family Organizer collection.