651868 - [Rapid Release] Localized 4.0 Snippet to Promote Aurora Channel

Status: RESOLVED FIXED

(Websites :: Other, defect)

Description

[Grace Jimenez :grace]

Hi all. Localized snippet to promote aurora channel in 
es, de, fr, pt, ja, it, pl,ru

translations can be found here:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/19zp6ljuE8qj46IGVBLxzgKe_b-t6a63R-AQthNBtcBw/edit?hl=en&authkey=COjHqPUP#

thanks!

Comment 1

[Pascal Chevrel:pascalc (PTO until Sept 2)]

Grace, do you need localizers for Spanish and Russian?

Comment 2

[Grace Jimenez :grace]

(In reply to comment #1)
> Grace, do you need localizers for Spanish and Russian?

hi pascal. that would be great! i emailed a few people but haven't heard back. =(
thanks for jumping in to help us with this!

Comment 3

[Pascal Chevrel:pascalc (PTO until Sept 2)]

Nukeador, Alexander, could you translate the snippet in the Google document Grace provided please? Thanks!

Comment 4

[Alexander L. Slovesnik]

Done for Russian.

Comment 5

[Rubén Martín [:Nukeador] ❌ [away till Aug 31st]]

Done for Spanish.

Comment 6

[Pascal Chevrel:pascalc (PTO until Sept 2)]

I am going to attach the snippets per locale in a more parsable format

Comment 7

[Pascal Chevrel:pascalc (PTO until Sept 2)]

Attachment: (de) snippet

Comment 8

[Pascal Chevrel:pascalc (PTO until Sept 2)]

Attachment: (es-ES) snippet

Ricardo, can you check the translation? I am not sure about the accented Quieres in particular, thanks :)

Comment 9

[Pascal Chevrel:pascalc (PTO until Sept 2)]

Attachment: (fr) snippet

Comment 10

[Pascal Chevrel:pascalc (PTO until Sept 2)]

Attachment: (it) snippet

Comment 11

[Pascal Chevrel:pascalc (PTO until Sept 2)]

Attachment: (pl) snippet

Comment 12

[Pascal Chevrel:pascalc (PTO until Sept 2)]

Attachment: (ru) snippet

Comment 13

[Pascal Chevrel:pascalc (PTO until Sept 2)]

Attachment: (pt-BR) snippet

Comment 14

[Pascal Chevrel:pascalc (PTO until Sept 2)]

Attachment: (ja) snippet

Comment 15

[RickieES aka Ricardo Palomares]

Attachment: Revised (es-ES) snippet

Yes, I've changed some things:

- "Quieres" is not accented
- "innovación" carries two "n", not one
- I've changed "novedosas" for "recientes", which I think sounds phonetically farther from "innovaciones".

Comment 16

[Jean-Bernard Marcon]

Comment on attachment 527667 [details]
(fr) snippet

>;Want to experience the newest innovations, even before they go to beta? <a href="%s">Download Mozilla Firefox Aurora</a>, our newest release channel.
>Envie de tester nos dernières innovations avant même quâelles ne soient disponibles en bêta&nbsp;? <a href="%s">Téléchargez Mozilla Firefox Aurora</a>, notre nouvelle version pour les amateurs dâexpérimentation.

Comment 17

[Jean-Bernard Marcon]

(In reply to comment #16)
> Comment on attachment 527667 [details]
> (fr) snippet
> 
> >;Want to experience the newest innovations, even before they go to beta? <a href="%s">Download Mozilla Firefox Aurora</a>, our newest release channel.
> >Envie de tester nos dernières innovations avant même qu'elles ne soient disponibles en bêta&nbsp;? <a href="%s">Téléchargez Mozilla Firefox Aurora</a>, notre nouvelle version pour les amateurs d'expérimentation.

Comment 18

[Francesco Lodolo [:flod]]

Comment on attachment 527668 [details]
(it) snippet

You could keep "download" untranslated, but it's not a transitive verb.

Comment 19

[Francesco Lodolo [:flod]]

Attachment: (it) snippet, revised

Revised Italian snippet (second part similar to the French translation)

Comment 20

[Michael Köhler [:Coce]]

Attachment: Revised German (de) snippet

I’ve fixed some errors in the German snippet. If Thomas has time, maybe he can have a look at it.

Comment 21

[Pascal Chevrel:pascalc (PTO until Sept 2)]

Attachment: (fr) snippet, updated

Comment 22

[Fernando Pereira Silveira]

Comment on attachment 527671 [details]
(pt-BR) snippet

just one or two changes...

;Want to experience the newest innovations, even before they go to beta? <a href="%s">Download Mozilla Firefox Aurora</a>, our newest release channel.
Você gostaria de experimentar as inovações mais recentes, antes mesmo de irem para a versão beta? <a href="%s">Baixe o Mozilla Firefox Aurora</a>, nosso mais novo canal de lançamentos.

Comment 23

[Marek Stępień [:marcoos, inactive]]

Comment on attachment 527669 [details]
(pl) snippet

Incorrect declension, bad punctuation...

Comment 24

[Laura Forrest]

Grace - Are there enough translations here or are we still waiting for more?

Comment 25

[Grace Jimenez :grace]

(In reply to comment #24)
> Grace - Are there enough translations here or are we still waiting for more?

nope we're good. we have all 8 requested. thanks!

Comment 26

[Marek Stępień [:marcoos, inactive]]

Attachment: (pl) snippet

Corrected version:
* slightly changed the wording
* fixed punctuation errors (missing comma in the 1st sentence)
* fixed mistranslation of "Download": was "Wypróbuj" ("try"), changed it to the actual world for "Download": "Pobierz"
* fixed mistranslation of the (un)word "experience": was "zobacz" ("see"), changed it do "Wypróbuj" ("try")
* worked around the lack of declension of "Mozilla Firefox Aurora" by declensing the helper word "program" - like we do in the browser l10n itself and what the Polish l10n style guide tells to do in such cases.

Comment 27

[Laura Forrest]

Les - can you help out batch importing the translations here?

Comment 28

[Grace Jimenez :grace]

pascal, just double checking, are we set with pt-BR, ja and german it still says review in the notes. if you can please confirm.. that would great.

Comment 29

[Kohei Yoshino [:kohei]]

Attachment: (ja) snippet, revised

Comment 30

[Laura Forrest]

We've got all the translations, closing this bug.

Comment 31

[Les Orchard [:lorchard]]

(In reply to comment #30)
> We've got all the translations, closing this bug.

There are still two translations with r? pending. I pushed the localized snippets live, but think I might have missed the revisions to ja. 

Are we sure there are no more changes? If so, can someone r+ those last remaining translations?

Comment 32

[Laura Forrest]

Grace - your call here.

Comment 33

[Pascal Chevrel:pascalc (PTO until Sept 2)]

Attachment: (pt-BR) revised snippet

Updated pt-BR snippet as per Fernando's suggestions

Comment 34

[Pascal Chevrel:pascalc (PTO until Sept 2)]

Please push the last pt-BR update to production, thanks.

Comment 35

[Grace Jimenez :grace]

(In reply to comment #31)
> (In reply to comment #30)
> > We've got all the translations, closing this bug.
> 
> There are still two translations with r? pending. I pushed the localized
> snippets live, but think I might have missed the revisions to ja. 
> 
> Are we sure there are no more changes? If so, can someone r+ those last
> remaining translations?

looks like ja and pt-BR has been updated. 
im fine with the german translations that ive initially provided.tnx

Comment 36

[Pascal Chevrel:pascalc (PTO until Sept 2)]

The German translation to use is the one provided by our localizer, Michael, in comment #20, it corrects errors in the initial translation in the Etherpad.

Comment 37

[Grace Jimenez :grace]

(In reply to comment #36)
> The German translation to use is the one provided by our localizer, Michael, in
> comment #20, it corrects errors in the initial translation in the Etherpad.

sorry missed comment 20. but i think the changes were captured before les pushed them in production. so i think the final copy that went out should reflect the changes that michael has made. didnt realize that there were already changes made as it still has the review comment. 
 
due to the timing we have. i dont think we can wait for another review. we will just go with what michael has provided. thank you pascal!

Comment 38

[Thomas Schwecherl]

Comment on attachment 527733 [details]
Revised German (de) snippet

German (de) snippet: r=me

Comment 39

[Pascal Chevrel:pascalc (PTO until Sept 2)]

all translations done and revised, marking fixed, thanks guys