721132 - 'Firefox and your devices' landing page - copy

Status: RESOLVED FIXED

(Marketing :: Copy, task)

Description

[Laura Forrest]

Chrissie was kind enough to get you to review the first pass at this page copy several weeks ago which was very helpful. Since then, a couple of things have changed so I wanted to have you take another quick look in order to finalize copy. 

Items to note:
1. Desktop and Mobile PMMs have reviewed their product lines - please check their copy changes and add any copy awesomeness they may have left out. The rest of the PMMs will be "informed" during the creative review process. 

2. To make sure this page focuses on answering how Firefox works on multiple devices I tweaked the categories a bit and made "Mobile & Tablets" into two different categories.  

3. I think the current headline "Firefox for your web" is a bit too vague so made some edits in the etherpad I'd love for you to review and improve upon if possible (I'm sure it is!). 

You can view all the copy here: https://etherpad.mozilla.org/landing-page-content 

Thanks!

Timing: Would be nice to have this within the next week, so by 2/1/2012. 

Graphics will be able to get started with the current version.

Comment 1

[Matej Novak [:matej]]

All set. Let me know if you need anything else here.

Comment 2

[Laura Forrest]

Nope - thanks!