724714 - [Firefox Beta] Snippets to current Firefox Beta users

Status: RESOLVED FIXED

(Marketing :: Copy, task)

Description

[Grace Jimenez :grace]

Hi Matej, 

In addition to acquiring new users (promoting beta to GA), we also want to reach our current beta users (1. users in old beta builds to update to the latest Firefox beta version) (2. encourage current users to provide feedback).

1. Getting  current users in old beta builds to update to the latest version (users using <11.0build) 
Message: Update to the latest beta beta version,  update the latest beta version and help test (3 versions)

2. Encourage current users to provide feedback 
Message: Provide your feedback via your feedback button, help make the next version of firefox even more awesome, share your feedback today. (2 versions).

ideal deadline: feb 10. 

thanks!

Laura, do you think it's possible to add a large image of the feedback button (like what we have in first run ) at the bottom of snippet copy?

Comment 1

[Matej Novak [:matej]]

Some options for both directions:


1.

Download the latest Firefox Beta to stay on top of performance, customization and security enhancements almost ready for prime time.

Make sure you're running the latest Firefox Beta so you can help us test the latest features.

Not on the latest Firefox Beta? Get it today to stay on top of what we're working on for our next version.


2. 

Make sure to use that feedback button and help make the next version of Firefox even more awesome.

Firefox Beta users: Don't forget to provide feedback to help us put the final tweaks on our next version.

Comment 2

[Grace Jimenez :grace]

this looks good. 

thanks!

Comment 3

[Grace Jimenez :grace]

(In reply to Matej Novak [:matej] from comment #1)
> Some options for both directions:
> 
> 
> 1.
> 
> Download the latest Firefox Beta to stay on top of performance,
> customization and security enhancements almost ready for prime time.
> 
> Make sure you're running the latest Firefox Beta so you can help us test the
> latest features.
+1 

what do you think of this:

Are you running the latest Firefox Beta? Get the latest Firefox Beta now and help us test the latest features.


> Not on the latest Firefox Beta? Get it today to stay on top of what we're
> working on for our next version.
+1 
> 
> 
> 2. 
> 
> Make sure to use that feedback button and help make the next version of
> Firefox even more awesome.
+1 

what do you think of this: 
> Want to share your feedback? Use the feedback button and help make the next version of Firefox even more awesome.


> 
> Firefox Beta users: Don't forget to provide feedback to help us put the
> final tweaks on our next version.
+1


thanks matej.

Comment 4

[Matej Novak [:matej]]

(In reply to Grace Jimenez :grace from comment #3)
> (In reply to Matej Novak [:matej] from comment #1)
> > Some options for both directions:
> > 
> > 
> > 1.
> > 
> > Download the latest Firefox Beta to stay on top of performance,
> > customization and security enhancements almost ready for prime time.
> > 
> > Make sure you're running the latest Firefox Beta so you can help us test the
> > latest features.
> +1 
> 
> what do you think of this:
> 
> Are you running the latest Firefox Beta? Get the latest Firefox Beta now and
> help us test the latest features.

Here's how I would tweak:

Are you running the latest Firefox Beta? Get it now and help us test the latest features.


> > Not on the latest Firefox Beta? Get it today to stay on top of what we're
> > working on for our next version.
> +1 
> > 
> > 
> > 2. 
> > 
> > Make sure to use that feedback button and help make the next version of
> > Firefox even more awesome.
> +1 
> 
> what do you think of this: 
> > Want to share your feedback? Use the feedback button and help make the next version of Firefox even more awesome.

I feel like we have a lot of snippets starting with a question lately. Don't see the benefit here since it means we have to repeat the word feedback. If we end up using this one, it should stay as written.

> 
> > 
> > Firefox Beta users: Don't forget to provide feedback to help us put the
> > final tweaks on our next version.
> +1
> 
> 
> thanks matej.

Comment 5

[Grace Jimenez :grace]

thanks matej. 

i think we are all set here. 
closing bug.