Closed Bug 727500 Opened 14 years ago Closed 14 years ago

[B2G Launch] Copy edit for 3 pages

Categories

(Marketing :: Copy, task)

Product:
Marketing
Component:
Copy
Platform:
x86
macOS
Type:
task
Priority:
Not set
Severity:
normal

Tracking

(Not tracked)

Status:
RESOLVED FIXED

People

(Reporter: christine.brodigan, Assigned: matej)

References

Details

Matej, This is a rush job, and should be turned around asap, so we can proceed over to design tomorrow. Can you review and edit two pages of copy: mozilla.org/b2g - landing page mozilla.org/b2g - about page On the etherpad, I've added "H1, H2, and body," those are notes for the designer and developer, try to pretend they aren't there:-) https://etherpad.mozilla.org/mozilla-org-b2g At the bottom there is an FAQ page, no worries on that one, it's really dense,I'm taking a first pass and we'll tackle post-launch.
Blocks: 727502
All set! Let me know if you need anything else.
Hi -- A note, we need to call this *Project* Boot to Gecko, since it's not a final name. Please check the copy and make this change at least for the first instance... emily
Other than the change from comment #2, has this copy been fully reviewed & approved?
(In reply to John Slater from comment #3) > Other than the change from comment #2, has this copy been fully reviewed & > approved? It has, it was worked on by Emily, Andres, Chris Lee, and others. I've moved it to a cleaner etherpad for Matej to do a polish.
One other thing: I'm hearing that in the MWC booth we're not saying boot to gecko or boot to web, it's called "open web devices". Is that something we need to consider here?
Here's what I got from Chris Lee, product manager yesterday. I haven't heard a new course today ... Open Web Device (OWD) -- This includes the UI + B2G platform and is a category of devices that uses Web technology as the base of its platform Open Web Platform (OWP) -- This is essentially B2G the platform. OWD -- It's a bit confusing, but this is Telefonica's UI + B2G. So as I understand it the Mozilla technology framework is boot to gecko, the stuff they are showing is open web device (as in a physical implementation of boot to gecko. I think on the site we're talking about the technology so we're OK with boot to gecko.
Thanks Emily. That sounds like at least one issue resolved then!
Just to clarify, OWD/OWP are not official product names/categories or brands. Thanks everyone for putting this together.
Closing resolved/fixed as we've moved to implementation for time's sake. As the product identity forms in the future, we can iterate. Follow Bug 727876 for implementation.
Status: NEW → RESOLVED
Closed: 14 years ago
Resolution: --- → FIXED
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