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Bug 738424
Opened 14 years ago
Updated 14 years ago
APPS - product page [copy]
Categories
(Marketing :: Copy, task)
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(Not tracked)
ASSIGNED
People
(Reporter: tshahian, Assigned: matej)
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(1 file, 2 obsolete files)
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16.00 KB,
application/msword
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Updated•14 years ago
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Status: NEW → ASSIGNED
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Comment 1•14 years ago
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Here's my first pass at cleaning up Dan's copy for this. It doesn't include all the extra bits we were talking about (links for developers, email signup, etc.), but that will all find it's way in during layout. Go ahead and have a look, but I'm mostly posting here for Ty as I think it will be easier to judge once mocked up.
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Comment 2•14 years ago
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Updated text here - please let me know if you think this is good to go.
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Comment 3•14 years ago
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Cleaned it up just a little bit. I think it's good to go.
Attachment #610618 -
Attachment is obsolete: true
Attachment #612190 -
Attachment is obsolete: true
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Comment 4•14 years ago
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Hi Tara / Ty - please can we add to design. Can you let me know when this will be ready for review?
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