789084 - Copy on registration flow is confusing at times

Status: VERIFIED FIXED

(Participation Infrastructure :: Phonebook, defect)

Description

[Aakash Desai [:aakashd]]

William Q's feedback on the copy text:

> Create Profile - page 1:
>
>
> "Location & Finish" --> "Location"
>
>
> [i think "Finish" is a bit confusing and not very necessary)
>
>
> Creat Profile - page 2:
>
>
> "Do you know which functional areas you would like to help or already
> helping?"
>
>
> -->
>
>
> "Please indicate the functional areas you are currently contributing
> to or would like to contribute to"
>
>
> [I don't think it makes sense to ask them if they *know* which areas
> they're already contributing to so I think it makes more sense to ask
> them to indicate their preferred areas]
>
>
> Create Profile - page 3:
>
>
> "Other vouched  Mozillians will be able to contact you easier and
> vice-versa" --> "Other vouched Mozillians will be able to locate you
> more easily and vice versa"
>
>
> "I'm ok with you handling this info as you explain in your privacy
> policy" --> "You are OK with the handling of this info as explained in
> Mozilla's privacy policy"
>
>
> [For the sake of consistency, I think it's better we to stick to 3rd
> person]
>
>

Comment 1

[[github robot]]

Commits pushed to master at https://github.com/mozilla/mozillians

https://github.com/mozilla/mozillians/commit/387e6a48f52ff7546a77b4ca5abc0860d517e289
[fix bug 789084] Clearer copy in registration

review fixes

https://github.com/mozilla/mozillians/commit/4513605990a01f231a19beba099545126e5c0d0e
Merge pull request #312 from sammybahamas/regflow

[fix bug 789084] Clearer copy in registration

Comment 2

[Chris More [:cmore]]

Attachment: Step 1 on stage

Comment 3

[Chris More [:cmore]]

Attachment: Step 2 on stage

Comment 4

[Chris More [:cmore]]

Attachment: Step 3 on stage

Comment 5

[Chris More [:cmore]]

Much cleaner! verified.