848654 - Wording in the SMS

Status: VERIFIED FIXED

(Marketplace Graveyard :: Payments/Refunds, defect, P3)

Description

[Andy McKay]

When you Bango sends an SMS to your phone the text reads:

"PIN: 11111. Thanks for using Bango!"

Since the user at that point has not had any interface with Bango at all, this might be confusing. I'm not sure what it should say but referencing the Firefox Marketplace would be a good idea.

Comment 1

[David Bialer [:dbialer]]

How about
"Please enter "11111" into Firefox Marketplace to confirm"

Should also be localized.  I hope that happens.

Comment 2

[Wil Clouser [:clouserw]]

David:  The string starts with "PIN: xxxxxx" on purpose because it appears in the summary when you get a new text message.

How about "PIN: 111111.  Thanks for using the Firefox Marketplace!"

Comment 3

[Maureen Hanratty]

+1 for Wil's suggestion with slight alternation to remove "the" 

"PIN: 111111. Thanks for using Firefox Marketplace!"

Comment 4

[David Bialer [:dbialer]]

+1 Wil....does PIN translate?

Comment 5

[Wil Clouser [:clouserw]]

(In reply to David Bialer [:dbialer] from comment #4)
> +1 Wil....does PIN translate?

Everything translates - that's what localizers do. :)

Keir:  Let's do the string in comment 3. Thanks.

Comment 6

[Keir Kettle]

(In reply to Wil Clouser [:clouserw] from comment #5)
> Keir:  Let's do the string in comment 3. Thanks.

Done - now on test.

Comment 7

[krupa raj[:krupa]]

verified fixed. See post-fix screenshot.

Comment 8

[krupa raj[:krupa]]

Attachment: post-fix screenshot