Closed
Bug 906859
Opened 12 years ago
Closed 12 years ago
New copy for X-Ray Goggles home page
Categories
(Webmaker Graveyard :: X-Ray Goggles, defect)
Tracking
(Not tracked)
RESOLVED
FIXED
People
(Reporter: daleee, Assigned: daleee)
Details
Attachments
(2 files)
As written by content team in https://etherpad.mozilla.org/v2-copy-goggles
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Updated•12 years ago
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Assignee: nobody → dale
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Comment 1•12 years ago
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Attachment #792825 -
Flags: review?(pomax)
Comment on attachment 792825 [details] [review]
Code Review
notes in the pull request. I like the higher specificity of the new copy, but it has bits that use wrong terminology that I think would be better changed.
Attachment #792825 -
Flags: review?(pomax) → review-
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Comment 3•12 years ago
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Pomax, awesome I'm glad you caught them... Can you comment here or in the etherpad so Erika and I can review? What bits are wrong?
https://github.com/mozilla/goggles.webmaker.org/pull/16/files has the things I ran across, they're attached to each line I found them on, so might be easier to use as a spotting guide (ignore the comments about markup, those are more for dale =)
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Comment 5•12 years ago
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Attachment #793519 -
Flags: review?(pomax)
Comment on attachment 793519 [details] [review]
Copy Review, Mk 2
looks good to me
Attachment #793519 -
Flags: review?(pomax) → review+
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Updated•12 years ago
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Status: NEW → RESOLVED
Closed: 12 years ago
Resolution: --- → FIXED
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Updated•12 years ago
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Attachment mime type: text/plain text/plain → text/x-github-pull-request text/x-github-pull-request
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