920226 - Firefox Student Ambassador October Newsletter - need copy help

Status: RESOLVED FIXED

(Marketing :: Copy, task)

Description

[Katherine Naszradi [:knaszradi]]

Draft here: https://docs.google.com/a/mozilla.com/document/d/1pwB9Bjh9IH9pHmRig3JKdNMG1U1ic5ViTud2hHcyKV4/edit

Please provide feedback by September 30th.

Thanks!

Kate

Comment 1

[Matej Novak [:matej]]

Lizz, hit it.

Comment 2

[Lizz Noonan - she/her (:lizzn)]

On it. I'll have something for you to look at Thursday/Friday this week :)

World domination continues...

Comment 3

[Katherine Naszradi [:knaszradi]]

much appreciated!

Comment 4

[Matej Novak [:matej]]

Just a note that I'll be in TRIBE in Friday so I probably won't get a chance to review until Monday.

Comment 5

[Lizz Noonan - she/her (:lizzn)]

Draft edit number one completed! Matej, take a look and send over any feedback pleeease.

Comment 6

[Matej Novak [:matej]]

Hey, I think it looks good. My main comment is that each story headline is pretty long. I'd love to get those shorter in the future. Let's aim to make them more interesting and enticing rather than explicitly descriptive. Thanks.

Comment 7

[Katherine Naszradi [:knaszradi]]

Thanks Matej. Liz, please lmk when you're done and I'll work on coding it.

Comment 8

[Lizz Noonan - she/her (:lizzn)]

Hi Kate - so sorry, I thought I already responded. My bad!

I changed the headings a bit, as Matej suggested. Should be all ready to go!