Closed Bug 1082763 Opened 11 years ago Closed 11 years ago

Design updated Webmaker mentor page

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(Webmaker Graveyard :: webmaker.org, defect)

x86
macOS
defect
Not set
normal

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(Not tracked)

RESOLVED FIXED

People

(Reporter: cassie, Assigned: mattheww)

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Details

(Whiteboard: [mozfest][oct17])

Attachments

(2 files, 2 obsolete files)

Based on the brief here: https://teach.etherpad.mozilla.org/mentor-info Let's suggest some easy / low-hanging fruit improvements to the Webmaker Mentor page for Mozfest.
Proposed edit of /mentor. Quick and easy changes to clean up the page. The goal: less talk, stronger calls to action. The page currently serves a mix of professional teachers and budding mentors at various levels of experience. The new simplified flow aims to 1 - get them on the list 2 - connect them to the community 3 - elevate their confidence and skills 4 - before we ask them to create an event
Attachment #8505096 - Flags: review?(michelle)
It's still a lot for one page, but I understand the need for a single first stop for new contacts. Long term, we could have an onboarding flow for mentors as they make their profile, identify what they know & like, and then point them directly to a single next step.
Thanks, Matthew! Love the huge step towards simplicity. The biggest challenge at the moment seems: the flow to sign-up (BSD) and to introduce yourself (Discourse). Is there a way we could simplify. Maybe use an email field, like on the partner landing pages. And then we can have supporting links to the Discourse to talk with the community more. But otherwise seems like we miss this conversion. Adding Lainie, Amira and Paul for thoughts as well.
Flags: needinfo?(paulj)
Flags: needinfo?(lainie)
Flags: needinfo?(amira)
Summary: Revise UX / flow of Webmaker mentor page → Design updated Webmaker mentor page
This is great work. Let's move quickly to make sure it gets shipped to production before MozFest. Then we can always refine further later. Next steps: 1) Design review (Cassie) 2) Copy review ** Content: Lainie, Amira, Paul ** Final proof: Matt or Erika D 3) File a build a ticket. To turn the the finalized design into a real page and ship.
Attachment #8505096 - Flags: review?(michelle)
Attachment #8505096 - Flags: review?(cassie)
Attachment #8505096 - Flags: review+
Revised design/copy in redpen based on feedback. Ready for design review then ticket for implementation.
Flags: needinfo?(lainie)
Flags: needinfo?(amira)
Attachment #8506270 - Flags: review?
Blocks: 1083925
I put the text and links in a pad for easier implementation. Final copy edits should be done here.
Attachment #8506279 - Flags: review?(matt)
* Matthew: I can't access that pad
Flags: needinfo?(mattheww)
Revised design with implementation notes. Added comments in redpen to call out adjustments from last iteration. Unlocked the etherad for final copy edits.
Attachment #8505096 - Attachment is obsolete: true
Attachment #8506270 - Attachment is obsolete: true
Attachment #8505096 - Flags: review?(cassie)
Attachment #8506270 - Flags: review?
Flags: needinfo?(mattheww)
Attachment #8506442 - Flags: review?(michelle)
Attachment #8506442 - Flags: review?(cassie)
Attachment #8506442 - Flags: feedback?
This looks awesome. A great improvement. My only comment is re: the main CTA "Join the Mailing List". We aren't giving anyone a compelling reason to do that. From user perspective sounds like another email I don't need. Some alternatives: "Volunteer to become a mentor" "Sign up to learn more" "Sign up to learn more about Webmaker Mentors" "Become a mentor" "Sign up for more info" "Contact me about becoming a mentor"
Flags: needinfo?(paulj)
* PaulJ: +1. Can you make your edits directly to the pad? https://webmaker.etherpad.mozilla.org/mentor-landing-page-copy * Otherwise: r+ from me on copy. Made a few proofing tweaks.
Flags: needinfo?(paulj)
Done
Flags: needinfo?(paulj)
Comment on attachment 8506442 [details] Updated design: https://redpen.io/fc4dfcfc3476a74717 Really like the copy updates. Left a couple comments around implementation. I'd like to help with the feature image, ping me.
Attachment #8506442 - Flags: review?(cassie) → review+
Michelle -- primary CTA is a button for list signup. Do you have a URL for the BSD form?
Flags: needinfo?(michelle)
Yes, it's this one: https://sendto.mozilla.org/page/s/mentor-signup We can remove the name fields to ensure it's the simplest sign-up. Let me know if I should modify that.
Flags: needinfo?(michelle)
Quick, minor edits to the copy in the etherpad. Also added to redpin for easy reference.
Attachment #8506279 - Flags: review?(matt) → review+
Looks like we're ready to build this!! I will update redpen with Michelle's final edit. Any new adjustments should happen in the etherpad and the build bug (Bug 1083925).
Status: ASSIGNED → RESOLVED
Closed: 11 years ago
Resolution: --- → FIXED
Attachment #8506442 - Flags: review?(michelle)
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